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Title: my new song
Post by: fendertele on May 12, 2009, 04:32:37 PM
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Title: Re: my new song
Post by: alexis on May 13, 2009, 04:58:25 AM
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[url]http://www.bebo.com/MP3Player.jsp?MemberId=5464536809[/url]

its the first track the rest are just demos, let me know what you think ;)


Hey Fendertele, this track sounds excellent! Very nice mood, tight tracks, good vocals.

Just on a technical level, a suggestion - the vocals are a little bit low in the mix in that it's hard to distinguish the words. Unless that was the intent ("mood vocals"?), maybe bring them up a bit, or add some more compression first would be nice?

Awesome tune, hats off to you dude!  :)

Title: Re: my new song
Post by: Bobber on May 13, 2009, 06:40:17 AM
Not bad Fenders! Not bad at all!  ;D

Some remarks (but you can always neglect those of course). I think the intro is quite long, plus after that it takes some time before you get to the chorus. But then, I'm the kind of composer that gives a lot away at the start of the song...
Title: Re: my new song
Post by: BlueMeanie on May 13, 2009, 06:59:30 AM
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But then, I'm the kind of composer that gives a lot away at the start of the song...

Does that mean we only have to listen to the first minute?  ;D
Title: Re: my new song
Post by: Bobber on May 13, 2009, 07:45:38 AM
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Does that mean we only have to listen to the first minute?  ;D

In a way yes. The rest is just a replay. But then again, most songs are in one way or another. Listen to the early stuff of The Beatles for instance.
Title: Re: my new song
Post by: Bungalow Bill on May 23, 2009, 04:17:42 PM
cool stuff Fendertele really cool stuff man... fab even.
Title: Re: my new song
Post by: fendertele on June 25, 2009, 09:43:57 PM
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Title: Re: my new song
Post by: Pilzkopf on September 18, 2009, 01:58:58 AM
[url]http://www.bebo.com/MP3Player.jsp?MemberId=5464536809[/url] ([url]http://www.bebo.com/MP3Player.jsp?MemberId=5464536809[/url])

its the first track the rest are just demos, let me know what you think ;)


Fender, that's a terrific backing on Breaking on the Inside. Loved that.