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[ohyea]

Since listening to them I have caught on to writing my own songs over some beatles songs such as Here Comes The Sun. Actually using the songs as practice to hone my writing skills and am wondering if anyone else has been inspired to do the same. In the future I want to start a band inspired by the fab four aswell.

I was wondering if any of you would respond to my songs so you could give me feedback on whether I should pursue this sort of dream! thx!

here are a few songs that I will post 1 by 1, enjoy!


Here is probably my first song I ever really finished because I write alot but never get around to a final draft that I believe to be a song. But remember these are inspired by Beatle songs so I may use some of the same words and focus on where the song is heading!

Here I used my favorite solo track from John, "Grow Old With Me" and renamed my song "Bless Us All". I hope you enjoy and please give me your honest opinion, thank you.

"Bless Us All"

grow strong along with me
our hope is all we need
let our worlds be one
let them know we love

God bless us all
God bless us all

grow strong along with me
our love is all we need
spending time with you
let it all come true

God bless us all
God bless us all

lending our love for each other
realize we are brothers

what would life be
if we weren't free?
how would we see?
how would we be?

grow strong along with me
our trust is all we need
between me and you
I hope we keep it true

love with no end
love with no end

so God bless us all
God bless us all...

[ohyea]

Here is another lyric inspired by a George song. "Here Comes The Sun" re-written as "Another Bright Day", enjoy.

there's something bright in the sky
there's something bright that I see
oh my-i

every morning I awake to see the lovely weather
when I'm yawning, I imagine how great it will feel

everyday is another day that I will love, that I love
oh my-i

every morning the children laugh & play together
every morning I wish they were all still here with me

Another Bright Day, another - bright day
it's all here

.....


hear them calling, the spirits that I knew once before
every morning I hear them louder than before

Another Bright Day, another - bright day
it's all here
Another Bright Day, another - bright day
it's all here, it's all here







here hope you enjoy this song. The song "Because" rewritten as "The Boy". The lyrics are very much so about me and my feelings if your wondering. This song is probably the first song I ever finished about a couple weeks before "Bless Us All", actually not really sure lol. well enjoy.


"The Boy"

the boy who never knew which way to turn
the boy who never knew
ohh....
he was the one who tried
but left behind
because his life had passed...ohh

he wanted more, but never knew
there was more, they never knew

because he was so scared
it made him cry inside
the boy who never knew
ohhh....

[An Apple Beatle]

Yo dude.....To be inspired by the Beatles is enough. Great to get feedback but YOU decide whether it's worth carrying on. I gotta say for me it was. I may not have learnt half my musicality if it was not for The mighty Beatles...best o luck and you should hunt down somedude, mairi and Anderson council who are very often writing lyrics on these boards. (Check out musicians corner.)

Hope that is of help, all the best.