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Re: Post your own lyrics here
« Reply #100 on: December 15, 2005, 12:23:51 AM »

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heh heh, you want more Marilyn?

I'm a 14 year old male... I WANT ALL OF MARILYN!
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« Reply #101 on: December 15, 2005, 12:47:33 AM »

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Actually not a song but a poem I've been trying to set to music:

Not really brown hair
But a sea for you to touch
And sort of kind of loving
Just a little bit too much
And I know it's not the things
You should be accustomed to
But really it's all I've got
To offer to someone like you
Sometimes I'm quite cynical
But I also believe in dreams
And I believe in something
Or at least that's how it seems
It's not the same as Barbie dolls
All lined up in a row
And I'm not as pretty as the other ones
Who'll jump when you say go
I may not be a princess
I may not be as good as all the rest
But I do have long brown hair
Tumbling down my modest bre@sts
So maybe it is something else
And I've never been on your mind
But turn around and take a look
There's something you can find


This is absolutely AWESOME Mairi! So honest and personal. Do you have an idea in your head how it should sound if set to music?

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« Reply #102 on: December 15, 2005, 02:46:56 AM »

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This is absolutely AWESOME Mairi! So honest and personal. Do you have an idea in your head how it should sound if set to music?

When I first read that post my thought was, that certainly dispells the myth that "There's no such thing as girls on the internet."

Also, if I made it into a song, what would you like me to call it? I'm thinking of just naming it after you.
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« Reply #103 on: December 15, 2005, 03:09:18 AM »

Okay, be open minded when you read this everyone, or else you'll think I'm insane. Its very creepy and disturbing... But  it is NOT advocating this kind of behavior. If anything, it is anti-violence, showing the disturbing nature at the human nature.

LOVE YOU SO

Why won't you take my e-mail?
I'm feeling ignored.
Oh, you might like to here this,
Y'know that picture you posted on the board?
I changed it to make background,
Printed it up and pasted it all over my wall,
All thats left is to win your heart,
Come to me,
Come to me,
Thou art...
Please please explain,
What made you stop?
We had so much in common,
We both liked Lennon,
We both have cats,
Were both vegetarians,
I am so entranced by your smile,
If only I could see you for a while,
Gimmee your number and I promise I'll dial,
Come to me,
Come to me,
Thou art...
You can cry on my shoulder,
I will be your boulder,
I will never let you go,
You will never leave my heart,
You will never leave my mind,
And someday before you know it,
You'll be in my eye Do not be afraid,
Do not fear a thing,
I will hold you and I will sing like your pretty bird,
Haven't you heard,
I love you,
I love you so,
Come to me,
Come to me,
Thou art,
Be mine,
Please.
Be mine please,
Be mine,
Please,
My mind is plagued by a disease,
Only you can cure,
You my love,
You,
Are the remedy,
Save me,
Cure me,
I know I'm insane but,
I know you love me deep inside,
Even though I am mad just a bit,
Is it that your afraid,
Its okay,
You can trust me honey,
Baby maybe one day we'll get married,
Share a house with 8 kids,
And I can work and you can cook,
And late at night we'll each read books,
Well lying in bed,
Come with me,
Without you my soul is dead
Please be mine,
I can't take it without you,
Will end it without you,
Sometimes I want to shout at you,
I feel ignored,
Sometimes I think your just some internet whore,
But ahh thats just foolishness,
Is it not?
I love you and you I too,
And the two of us shall do the things all things two lovers do,
I found your boyfriend's e-mail,
Don't worry he won't get in the way,
Through hacking I've found him to be gay,
Blackmailed him and let him know,
She's got a new guy now,
In me,
Can't you see?
We were meant to be...
Be mine
Be mine
Be mine
Be mine
Be mine
Be mine
Be mine so
Be mine please,
I feel it all slipping away,
I'm going insane,
The more I long for you,
The more I need you.
You may be flattered to know,
I've stopped looking at porn,
Your beautiful enough,
Drop dead gorgeous,
That I don't need that smut,
Those fake breasts,
Those greasy butts,
'Cause I've got you,
A Modern Munroe,
I'll die without you,
Die inside,
And when dead inside,
Who is really alive?
So without you,
I hope yo know,
I'll blow myself out in the snow,
Ohh...
Be mine
Be mine
Be mine
Be mine
Be mine
Come to me
Come to me
Come to me
Come to me
Come to me
Come to me
Come to me
Come to me
Come to me
Come to me
Come to me
Come to me
Come to me
Thou art...
Oh how I need you,
I breathe, see, and eat you,
Your always on my mind,
Not sexually,
I'm not that kind of guy,
Why would you ignore me so?
We have so much in common,
Come to me
Come to me
Come to me
Thou art...
Come to me,
Come to me,
Come to me,
Thou art...
Come to me,
Come to me,
Come to me,
Thou art...
I'm almost there...
Please be my mate...
I just crossed into the state...
I'm in your county...
I'm in your town...
I'm on your lane...
I'm in your house....
I'm on your bed...
With you beneath me...
Why'd it have to be this way...
Why would you do this to me?
Look what you went and made me do, hon...
Its okay, I still love you...
They won't bury you...
I won't let them...
You'll stay in my house...
You'll sleep in my bed...
We never had what we could have before...
Maybe now it will be easier...
Now that your dead...

I'm not proud. I am made uncomfortable to read it and even more uneasy thinking about the fact it came out of my head. I am sorry if this has offended anyone.
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Re: Post your own lyrics here
« Reply #104 on: December 15, 2005, 09:09:08 AM »

Great set of lyrics actually - very filmic. I love the way the madness just builds and builds - reminds me a little of Eminem's "Stan".

Nice one! :)

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« Reply #105 on: December 15, 2005, 09:11:02 AM »

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I'm thinking of just naming it after you.

Me? Nah, name it after Mairi!! ;D Hee hee

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« Reply #106 on: December 15, 2005, 01:17:30 PM »

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Great set of lyrics actually - very filmic. I love the way the madness just builds and builds - reminds me a little of Eminem's "Stan".

Nice one! :)

I love that song.
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« Reply #107 on: December 15, 2005, 07:49:15 PM »

obviously i cant top mairi's but this is something that i came up with last night. about half way through i realized that it carried similar tune to Happy Xmas (War is Over). so  i thought id put the parts of each verse from Xmas for you guys to follow along

(beginning)
You told me to fight,
You told me to win,
Wielding the wit,
That is razor thin,

(and so this is xmas...)
We fought for justice,
We fought for peace,
But our cause is too small,
To let it release

(a very merry xmas...)
We
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« Reply #108 on: December 15, 2005, 09:49:52 PM »

Don't worry. Many of my poems resemble my inspirations works. WHEE!, my tribute to Syd Barrett, sounds almost identical to Flaming in spots.
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« Reply #109 on: December 15, 2005, 10:17:51 PM »

I know what you mean, one of my songs sounds a lot like "Pieces of You" by Jewel.
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« Reply #110 on: December 15, 2005, 10:43:37 PM »

Mairi, before I can do anything with that I need to know what kind of sound you want:

Heavy
Melodic
progressive
ambient
bluesy

I mean, there are many more but out of those 5 if what I was thinking.
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« Reply #111 on: December 15, 2005, 11:26:28 PM »

Something melodic, maybe a little Jealous Guy-ish sounding.
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« Reply #112 on: December 15, 2005, 11:30:29 PM »

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Something melodic, maybe a little Jealous Guy-ish sounding.

I was thinking melodic, too, actually. Ever hear Remember The Day by Pink Floyd?
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« Reply #113 on: December 15, 2005, 11:31:54 PM »

Yeah, that sounds familiar...
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« Reply #114 on: December 15, 2005, 11:36:30 PM »

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Yeah, that sounds familiar...

Its early. From their second LP, and not the Floyd most people know. Certainly not the vision of a bi-polar rock star like The Wall.
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« Reply #115 on: December 15, 2005, 11:46:36 PM »

Flicker flam!
Thank you ma'am!
Love you?
Yes I do!
Flacker Flim!
Wanna see a film?
Me and you?
'Cause I quite do!
Falm Filcker!
I'll buy you a silk shirt!
When I get the money!
I'll buy you whatever you want!
Whatever you need!
If you'll call me honey!

This is my attempt at an early Beatles style song.
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« Reply #116 on: December 16, 2005, 01:46:08 AM »

eh. you must embrace the 60s pop feel, my young padawan learner  :P

only then can you fully create an early beatles-esque song, grasshopper

a wise man once said, "we're gonna be around longer then christianity"
....think like you are more powerful then jesus and you will make a early beatles-esque song ;D
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« Reply #117 on: December 16, 2005, 01:48:24 AM »

btw, can anyone at least critizise any of my songs please...

all i am saying, is give em a chance
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« Reply #118 on: December 16, 2005, 02:24:49 AM »

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i have no idea what inspired me to write this creepy little diddy, but i was browsing through my massive lists of songs and found this. hope you enjoy

I saw the bullet
Flying through the hole,
Prying up my soul,
Taking on its toll,

My life went by,
I felt a mother
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« Reply #119 on: December 16, 2005, 02:45:07 AM »

sweet, thanks man. dont forget the others that no one has reviewed yet. i think they're like the last two or three i posted
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