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Re: Post your own lyrics here
« Reply #120 on: December 16, 2005, 02:47:43 AM »

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btw, can anyone at least critizise any of my songs please...

all i am saying, is give em a chance

I don't want to critique them if there songs, because then I'm only getting part of it. And it just takes time for me to put up a full analysis which is why I've kept to mainly shorter responses.
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« Reply #121 on: December 16, 2005, 02:08:11 PM »

song is such a general term for me, at most, i have a basic tune to the lyrics. they're just beefed up poems
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Re: Post your own lyrics here
« Reply #122 on: December 18, 2005, 04:49:11 AM »

Just another one I wrote recently

Dream

Last night I dreamed that you and I
Were walking hand in hand
And you whispered all your hidden thoughts
As we walked along the sand
But the second that I closed my eyes
You vanished with the mist
And I stood alone and wondered why
I never had been kissed

(Chorus)
But it was only a dream
And we were never meant to be
It was just a fantasy
You were never close to me
And you will never see

As the summer rain began to fall
I sat down by the shore
And as it trickled down my face
I only hoped for more
Left alone to lick my wounds
I watched the ocean's tide
Like a lonely sailor cast away
With no one by my side

(Chorus)

You know it's easier to believe
When nothing's in your way
But that doesn't seem to be the case
When you're waiting every day
I can see what today's wind will blow
Whatever will happen to you I don't know...
Now I'm searching for another reprieve
How can I be sure you won't just leave?
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« Reply #123 on: December 18, 2005, 04:55:34 AM »

pretty good...your songs are like good expanded versions of mine...its deep

btw, do you like emo music. i was wondering since from what ive been able to understand about emo, its music about losing someone or something, with like loads of metaphors...and i think that does kinda fit with that. but then again im not all that on top of emo.
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Re: Post your own lyrics here
« Reply #124 on: December 18, 2005, 04:55:39 AM »

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Just another one I wrote recently

Dream

Last night I dreamed that you and I
Were walking hand in hand
And you whispered all your hidden thoughts
As we walked along the sand
But the second that I closed my eyes
You vanished with the mist
And I stood alone and wondered why
I never had been kissed

(Chorus)
But it was only a dream
And we were never meant to be
It was just a fantasy
You were never close to me
And you will never see

As the summer rain began to fall
I sat down by the shore
And as it trickled down my face
I only hoped for more
Left alone to lick my wounds
I watched the ocean's tide
Like a lonely sailor cast away
With no one by my side

(Chorus)

You know it's easier to believe
When nothing's in your way
But that doesn't seem to be the case
When you're waiting every day
I can see what today's wind will blow
Whatever will happen to you I don't know...
Now I'm searching for another reprieve
How can I be sure you won't just leave?

Thats sweet. Reminds me of a dream I had last night though mine was a fair bit darker.
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Re: Post your own lyrics here
« Reply #125 on: December 18, 2005, 04:59:51 AM »

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pretty good...your songs are like good expanded versions of mine...its deep

btw, do you like emo music. i was wondering since from what ive been able to understand about emo, its music about losing someone or something, with like loads of metaphors...and i think that does kinda fit with that. but then again im not all that on top of emo.

No, I don't listen to emo... or whatever it is the kids are listening to these days... ::) lol...

Most of my songs are really depressing, but that's only because I don't really have anything wonderful to sing about... and even when I try to write something upbeat, it comes out sounding cliched. I think Me and My Shadow was the only good "up" song I ever wrote.

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Re: Post your own lyrics here
« Reply #126 on: December 18, 2005, 05:02:28 AM »

Im in bed
Aching head
Gold is lead
Choke on bread
Underfed
Gold is lead
Jesus bled
Pain is red
Doctor
Groul ghoul
Greasy spoon
Used spoon
June blue

Music seems to help the pain
Seems to stimulate the brain
Doctor kindly tell your wife that I'm alive,
Flowers thrive
Realize
Realize
Realize...


WHAT?!?!
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« Reply #127 on: December 18, 2005, 05:04:02 AM »

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No, I don't listen to emo... or whatever it is the kids are listening to these days... ::) lol...

Most of my songs are really depressing, but that's only because I don't really have anything wonderful to sing about... and even when I try to write something upbeat, it comes out sounding cliched. I think Me and My Shadow was the only good "up" song I ever wrote.


When I'm being serious my songs are very depressing but if I just go goofy they can be upbeat...

Most of my "serious up" songs are about sex, lewd as it may be.
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« Reply #128 on: December 18, 2005, 05:08:05 AM »

Haha, I wrote a song about sex once. It was crappy. Seeing as I don't have much experience in that area. :P
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Re: Post your own lyrics here
« Reply #129 on: December 18, 2005, 05:12:15 AM »

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Haha, I wrote a song about sex once. It was crappy. Seeing as I don't have much experience in that area. :P


I have a few, I think you read em. There in my rock opera.
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« Reply #130 on: December 18, 2005, 05:16:14 AM »

Women are my rock star thing. Aside from getting my messages across, its the girls... I could do without fame and fortune but I sooo want the rock star thing. I have a notebook were I keep quotes concerning my ideals.. ehh... Misadventures. Not for any reason, they are just funny stories that I like. And a quote concerning loss of bodily fluids of young girls well see The Boys at the Ed Sullivan show. And a story concerning an octopus, a groupie, and Led Zeppelin. Its all quite funny that I keep that stupid sh*t. I must get really bored sometimes.
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« Reply #131 on: December 18, 2005, 05:24:00 AM »

I seriously wrote this in like the last 15 minutes. Its a slow tempo that builds up on the "Lay down your love..." part

Close your eyes,
Let your mind fly,
Let your spirit soar,
To the pearly white doors,

Lose yourself,
Let your mind know it
And your heart opens,
The door
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« Reply #132 on: December 18, 2005, 05:25:31 AM »

I either have like uplifting love (see like early beatles paul songs), rather sad and depressing love songs, or really political songs that range from sarcasim to anger (last one was sarcasim...and the "Mr. Bobo" song)
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« Reply #133 on: December 18, 2005, 05:25:57 AM »

and yes, I refered to the president as Mr. Bobo  ;D ;D ;D
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Re: Post your own lyrics here
« Reply #134 on: December 18, 2005, 05:28:54 AM »

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and yes, I refered to the president as Mr. Bobo
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« Reply #135 on: December 18, 2005, 05:33:48 AM »

well, "dear mr dickhead" could refer to anyone and everyone. at least i kinda narrowed it down.

anyway, come on, tell me how good or bad my crap songs are. (in the words of lennon, all my songs are crap!)
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« Reply #136 on: December 18, 2005, 06:49:52 AM »

MOTEL

Heroin Whores pave the doorways of place
And there's cum on the floor and there's cum on the bedspread and there's cum on the dreser at the bed's end
So come on ol' girl from the side o' the road and we'll get all comfy
Girl can you not see we were meant to be
And there's whore's in the beds and there's pimps in the bath and there's coke in the dresser and there's gold in the bed
And a junkie lays at the doorsteps not movin' a bit, lyin' in his own sh*tt 'cause for the last three weeks he's been dead
So come on ol' girl from the side o' the road and we'll get all comfy
Girl can't you see we were meant to be
And there's pervs in the back who crawled outta the theater with wet paints and sticky fingers
And there's leatherbound men whipping naked women and there's a vet in the third floor with a shotgun to his head
So come on ol' girl from the side o' the road and we'll get all comfy
Girl can you not see we were meant to be
And the owner is in the storage room on a chair with a noose round his neck and upstanding hair
And his daughters on the street 'cause he pushed her out in the cold and she needs to make a buck and her money's two-fold
'Cause she'll do anything for any amount o' money so she has no standards she'll do jocks or middle-aged, or nerds
And she don't know it yet but she's 2 months pregnant from a night at a party where she was gagged with drapes and then gangraped
And she where's too much make-up and she's headed down the path back to that motel where the Heroin Whores pave the doorways of the place,
And thats why I'm hear ol' girl from the side of the road 'cause until then we only knew rumors and its worse then I ever coulda knew,
And what're ya gonna do?
I'm goin' to the motel,
Give that doorbell a ring,
Ya may be mad now girl but I guarantee
I just saved your life
This is a sting
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« Reply #137 on: December 18, 2005, 05:19:42 PM »

This is a really STUPID, STUPID song that could be a huge hit (it's very catchy)

The Coconut Song

If you're feeling down in the dumps
The Coconut Song will pick you up
You just have to shake your thing
It makes you wanna dance and sing

(Chorus)

Coconut
Coconut
Coconut
Coconut
Coconut
Coconut
Coconut
Coconut

Dance and dance and never stop
Until you reach the very top
Wave your arms up in the air
Wave 'em around, like you just don't care

(Chorus)

It's a brand new dance sensation
The Coconut song is sweeping the nation
So everyone get out on the floor
And dance and dance some more!

(Chorus)

Come on, take a chance
It's the Coconut dance
Come on, take a chance
It's the Coconut dance

(Chorus X2)


Bob Dylan would NOT be proud.
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« Reply #138 on: December 18, 2005, 05:38:43 PM »

But Bananarama might!
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« Reply #139 on: December 19, 2005, 03:09:58 AM »

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This is a really STUPID, STUPID song that could be a huge hit (it's very catchy)

The Coconut Song

If you're feeling down in the dumps
The Coconut Song will pick you up
You just have to shake your thing
It makes you wanna dance and sing

(Chorus)

Coconut
Coconut
Coconut
Coconut
Coconut
Coconut
Coconut
Coconut

Dance and dance and never stop
Until you reach the very top
Wave your arms up in the air
Wave 'em around, like you just don't care

(Chorus)

It's a brand new dance sensation
The Coconut song is sweeping the nation
So everyone get out on the floor
And dance and dance some more!

(Chorus)

Come on, take a chance
It's the Coconut dance
Come on, take a chance
It's the Coconut dance

(Chorus X2)


Bob Dylan would NOT be proud.

Ms. Marley, the doctor will see you now, please take the noose off from around your neck and get off our chair.
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