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Re: Post your own lyrics here
« Reply #80 on: December 10, 2005, 03:58:43 PM »

not bad, didnt really keep the same rythem thoughout, but that isnt all that bad.

whose captain beefheart?
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Re: Post your own lyrics here
« Reply #81 on: December 10, 2005, 04:56:28 PM »

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whose captain beefheart?


Well, as I just woke up I'm too lazy to explain it so I'm jus going to link you to the thread, 'kay?

http://dmbeatles.com/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?,b=othermusic,v=display,m=latest
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Re: Post your own lyrics here
« Reply #82 on: December 10, 2005, 08:25:27 PM »

ah of course, silly jar-jar :P
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Re: Post your own lyrics here
« Reply #83 on: December 11, 2005, 10:52:20 PM »

and lyrics reviews out there?
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Re: Post your own lyrics here
« Reply #84 on: December 12, 2005, 10:50:33 PM »

Actually not a song but a poem I've been trying to set to music:

Not really brown hair
But a sea for you to touch
And sort of kind of loving
Just a little bit too much
And I know it's not the things
You should be accustomed to
But really it's all I've got
To offer to someone like you
Sometimes I'm quite cynical
But I also believe in dreams
And I believe in something
Or at least that's how it seems
It's not the same as Barbie dolls
All lined up in a row
And I'm not as pretty as the other ones
Who'll jump when you say go
I may not be a princess
I may not be as good as all the rest
But I do have long brown hair
Tumbling down my modest bre@sts
So maybe it is something else
And I've never been on your mind
But turn around and take a look
There's something you can find
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Re: Post your own lyrics here
« Reply #85 on: December 12, 2005, 11:01:43 PM »

Each line seems so real... so true to the truth: naked truth, really.
I do admire you for being so brave as you've shown in that poem, ... woman.
I take my hat off.

P.S. I don't think it needs music,... it has strengh.
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Re: Post your own lyrics here
« Reply #86 on: December 12, 2005, 11:15:13 PM »

ur just saying that cause u proposed to her. we didnt have that chance.

btw nice poem. like to hear it as a song
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Re: Post your own lyrics here
« Reply #87 on: December 12, 2005, 11:19:08 PM »

jeez, she goes soul searching...what do i do? i talk about jesus and the devil and sh*t. damn political songs  ;D :P
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« Reply #88 on: December 13, 2005, 12:14:06 AM »

Mairi, that was wonderful. the best post here thus far.
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« Reply #89 on: December 13, 2005, 04:54:33 PM »

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ur just saying that cause u proposed to her. we didnt have that chance.

btw nice poem. like to hear it as a song


BUT WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU SAYING, dude???!!!! I've NEVER proposed to her or even tried or thought (sorry, it sounds terrible). TELL US when and where I did such a thing!!!.
You're badly wrong: it was TheMasterOfGoingFaster:
http://dmbeatles.com/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b=admin,m=1133655518

I've just said what I do thought, as I used to ... and the poem explains by itself.
I like Mairi for being the way she is,... and you're not near to reality. I'm old enough for not being playing those games, guy, ... tho I can admit I may sound like a teenager sometimes...
By the way, what's the problem if YOU, somedude210, want to porpose to her???

P.S. I don't think it needs music,... it has strengh.
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« Reply #90 on: December 13, 2005, 05:11:59 PM »

I have to say, the poem impressed me :)
Great body of work.
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Re: Post your own lyrics here
« Reply #91 on: December 13, 2005, 06:56:16 PM »

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BUT WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU SAYING, dude???!!!! I've NEVER proposed to her or even tried or thought (sorry, it sounds terrible). TELL US when and where I did such a thing!!!.
You're badly wrong: it was TheMasterOfGoingFaster:
http://dmbeatles.com/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b=admin,m=1133655518

I've just said what I do thought, as I used to ... and the poem explains by itself.
I like Mairi for being the way she is,... and you're not near to reality. I'm old enough for not being playing those games, guy, ... tho I can admit I may sound like a teenager sometimes...
By the way, what's the problem if YOU, somedude210, want to porpose to her???

P.S. I don't think it needs music,... it has strengh.


whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa...lois this is not my batman cup.;D

but anyway, sorry, i was sorely mistaken. i was just kidding around. i didnt mean to upset you. i must've thought that it was you that proposed since you say so much that i cant keep track of what you actually say. im sorry dude. didnt mean to cause you so much flippage

we cool?
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Re: Post your own lyrics here
« Reply #92 on: December 13, 2005, 09:55:35 PM »

Quote from: raxo

BUT WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU SAYING, dude???!!!! I've NEVER proposed to her or even tried or thought (sorry, it sounds terrible). TELL US when and where I did such a thing!!!.
You're badly wrong: it was TheMasterOfGoingFaster:
http://dmbeatles.com/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b=admin,m=1133655518

I've just said what I do thought, as I used to ... and the poem explains by itself.
I like Mairi for being the way she is,... and you're not near to reality. I'm old enough for not being playing those games, guy, ... tho I can admit I may sound like a teenager sometimes...
By the way, what's the problem if YOU, somedude210, want to porpose to her???

P.S. I don't think it needs music,... it has strengh.



Well, if--And this is a big if--I were to know her personally and somewhat well (which I don't) I could see that. However, I do not, and I would never propose to one over the internet. Its scary, man. There have been times though, were I swore to myself well talking to a girl "God, if any of the girls in Wisconsin were anywhere near THAT cool, I would soo ask them out". However, any sort of "relationship" with someone over the internet that you have never met, beyond friendly chatting, just creeps me out so, uh no, not me. And I was under the assumption TheMasterOfGoingFast was kidding around.
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Re: Post your own lyrics here
« Reply #93 on: December 13, 2005, 09:57:51 PM »

Mairi, if you would like I could set it to music and post it for you. However, as it is your poem I would largely leave it to you to figure this kind of stuff out. Just an offer.
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« Reply #94 on: December 14, 2005, 02:11:48 AM »

That would be so cool! I'd love to hear a version of it to music. I'm crap at writing melodies anyway.
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« Reply #95 on: December 14, 2005, 02:46:26 AM »

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That would be so cool! I'd love to hear a version of it to music. I'm crap at writing melodies anyway.

Well, I'll tell you what:

Give Mary more room on your sig and I could make sure it gets on an album. Or I could just do it if you wanted me to and didn't want to change your sig, I suppose.
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« Reply #96 on: December 14, 2005, 02:37:44 PM »

heh heh, you want more Marilyn?
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« Reply #97 on: December 14, 2005, 09:20:26 PM »

ill drink to that!!! (beer)
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« Reply #98 on: December 14, 2005, 09:23:30 PM »

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ill drink to that!!! (beer)

Yes, we know now that you probably drink to anything.
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« Reply #99 on: December 14, 2005, 10:49:20 PM »

hahahahaha, oh yea...but more of maryilyn, id definately drink to that one
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