Thanks for your responses. Yeah, I noticed the vocals needed some leveling too. One thing about the Beatles' harmonies I've noticed is that even though on so many tracks they would have outstanding backup vocal harmonies, they at times would be buried (for lack of a better term) beneath the rest of the music. I think the general consensus is that harmonies should be just that -- complimentary. Otherwise the listener has no way to gauge what the true melody of the track is.
Alexis, do you make music too? I'd love to hear something you've written. Again thanks for your responses. Rock on!

I added another song. I know it needs a remix to get more vocals in it.

Very nice mate. I particularly liked 'Going Round'. It has that Dutch Proggy sound to it!

Thanks for the review. But, ehm, what is the Dutch proggy sound?

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Thanks for the review. But, ehm, what is the Dutch proggy sound?

I'm not really sure! I think it's got to do with the vocals, and guitar sound. Dutchmen singing in English always remind me of early 70's Dutch prog, like Kayak, and someone else who's name escapes me. I don't me you sound like them, just that it reminds me.

is a musician and is working on a record and I convinced him to record a version of "Medicine Jar" so it'll be included on the album  

Here's his myspace if you'd like to check it out and tell me what you think of him as a musician?

http://www.myspace.com/lennymink

Hello everyone, my name's Tony and I'm a beatles fan (sounds like an AA meeting). I'm happy that I found this board because the others that I saw were terrible (i.e. who's the hottest beatle? etc.). This section in particular interests me because I'm trying my hand at writing my own songs, something that I was driven to do after reading Bob Spitz Biography of the Beatles. Anyway, if any of you want to check out my stuff my myspace is http://www.myspace.com/tonyhunter27. I look forward to hearing all of your music as well.

-Tony

Noticed a few similar style threads round here, so I have merged into 1 place to share opinion and plug your gigs etc.

The links below is what i get up to. The Chancers is my main thing though and I particularly enjoy playing in the Apple Beatles.

Most band myspaces in one place. Exchange feedback and plug your band here....me? my links are below my signature.

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me? my links are below my signature.

Ditto.

Hi guys, I just posted a new song on myspace if anybody wants to check it out. It's called "Nearly" and I've had it on the shelf for some time but just dusted it off and recorded it last night. My singing could be better so I apologize but it's kind of a tough melody to sing at times. Hope you like it.

-Tony

Nice chords and sounds Tony. You wanna check out this band from where I live..i reckon you will dig em. The Bee's. In America they are known as Band of Bees.

Hi,

I've a band called Sonoride, wich pretty much is influenced by songs like Strawberry Field, I'm the Walrus and that kind of stuff. It's really great actually, and if you like you can check us out at http://www.myspace.com/sonoride

good music actually thanks for the link.....

Hi everybody.
I'm a great Beatles fan.
I have a version of Blackbird and 3 more songs that I composed here:

http://www.myspace.com/rodrapol

if you want to listen to it.

Cya.