Chapter 1
   
                            Sarah’s Leaving

                  Sarah sighed the wind blowing her hair. Her bags were packed she was ready. Rachel, Tina, and Jessica came running up to her. Rachel almost as tall as Sarah, Tina was not quite as tall as the other two, and Jess the youngest. Jackie came up and hugged Sarah “Good luck.” Sarah hugged her mother, “Thanks.” Meanie did the same, “When is your first break?” Sarah smiled and looked up at her father, “Next Month.” Sarah got in the cab, and drove off.



                “I hope Sarah does good in College,” Rachel laughed. The 16 year old stood up and turned to 14 year old Tina, who turned to 5 year old Jessica. All the girls still had long black hair, except Jessica, who took after her mother and had long dark brown hair. Their father still being taller than all of them but not towering over them. Sarah’s room was there for when she came home on breaks. Rachel’s room now painted a nice lavender. She still had the canopy, but a different bedspread. She had a tall stereo in the corner of the room, teddy Bears lying on her window seat. Tina’s room was a rather darker blue; she had a nice big bed with a brass headboard. She too had a stereo, but not as tall as Rachel’s. Jessica’s room was still pink, from when she was first born. It looked almost the same, she had fuzzy butterflies all over her room, and a small radio on the nightstand.

                Jackie sighed and hugged her husband. “Can you imagine, Sarah getting married,” Jackie smiled. “Don’t push it, “Meanie laughed. They went back in the house and walked upstairs. Meanie then picked up Jackie, “Oooh,” she giggled. Rachel stood in the doorway and crossed her arms. “At it again,” she laughed her long black hair in her face. Meanie shot her a glare “Don’t start.” Rachel shrugged and walked away. Jessica ran up to her mother, “Mommy, I’m hungry.” Jackie called Tina in, “Honey, Jess is hungry.” Tina sighed and walked downstairs with Jess. Meanie smiled at Jackie, “Now, where were we.” They began to kiss, when they heard a scream. Jackie ran downstairs to the noise. Meanie growled and clenched his fist. “They are still a pain in the a**,” he murmured

Tell me what ya'll think about it

It's very good - nice characterisation.

Is "Meanie" the father though- I wasn't sure?

AL

yea

Is he the REAL Blue Meanie - or is that just his nickname?

Yup, real Chief Blue Meanie through and through


I'm Jackie

Ah, I see! He doesn't seem that mean... yet!!

He will, you'll see

Chapter 2


                    New House


                Their house was already 18 years old, as old as Sarah. Jackie and Meanie were planning to move to a bigger newer house. They found an ad in the paper. That day they went driving in the country to look at the house. They turned onto a quiet country road it was rocky and bumpy. Then they went around the corner to a wooded area. Jackie gasped, “Oh My God,” she shrieked.


 


                        The house was beautiful, they got out of the car to have a look inside. She gasped the minute they walked in the door. The staircase was beautiful, the chandelier hung in the middle. They went upstairs and saw an oversized bedroom for them, and smaller bedrooms for the girls. Jackie smiled at Meanie, who shook his head. “No, I have to show you a nice house.” “Where, “ Jackie puzzled. “It’s at home,” he sighed.


 
                        When they got home Meanie printed the picture off the Real Estate website. “Here it is.”




 

          He read out the info and the location, “The beautiful London countryside.” Jackie gasped, “England, you want to move to England???” “Well, yea,” he smiled. Jackie smiled, “Ok, since you are from there, and this house is beautiful, ok fine with me, you have to tell the girls.” He called the girls downstairs. They all agreed. “You have to tell Sarah,” Rachel smiled.




Chapter 3

                  Sarah’s Visit To The New House



                    The plane landed in London, Sarah rented a car. She looked at the instructions that her mother had given her. Sarah drove through hills and miles of countryside. Finally turned up the private road. She gasped, “Well this is it.” She rang the doorbell Tina came to the door. Her black hair was no longer long, she had cut it up to her shoulders. She hugged Tina, “Wanna see the property in the back?” Sarah nodded her head, Tina shut the door and they walked towards the back.


                                           





Tina pointed out, “Our property ends where those trees are.” Tina turned to look at her sister. “You, me and Rachel are gonna go shopping in London today.” Sarah smiled, “Your lucky I’ve got money.” They went inside the house, “Hello,” Sarah called. Jackie walked over to Sarah, “Oooh Sarah.” Meanie came down and saw Sarah, and he too gave her a hug. Jackie looked at her watch, “Well if you girls are going shopping, you’d better go.” Sarah and the two others walked out to the driveway and opened the garage. “Wow, Mom got a new car,” Sarah smiled. “Yup a Jaguar,” Tina laughed. Rachel laughed,” I have a car too.” She pointed to a BMW. “Dad got a new car too,” Tina pointed to a red Lincoln.



Chapter 4


                    Jessica’s Scars


              Rachel drove in the BMW to the highway. Then Big Ben came into view. Sarah smiled, “Have you guys been here before?” “Yea, we are going to school here,” Rachel smiled. Sarah looked at Rachel and Tina, “You guys got dark.” “Yea, we tanned.”  They parked the car on a city street and paid the meter. They poked their heads into different stores. After a while they decided to leave. In the car they discussed family. “Jessica looks so much like Mom,” Sarah laughed. “Yea, she does, I see Dad in her also,” Tina laughed. “Her hair is not as dark as ours,” Rachel laughed. Sarah turned to Rachel, “You are a spitting image of Dad.” Rachel smiled and drove on.


                When they pulled up the driveway, Jackie saw them coming. “Come on guys, dinner is ready.” Jessica sat at the table next to her father. She looked up at Meanie and giggled. Jackie smiled at Meanie and sat down. The girls put their bags down and sat at the table. Jess continued to smile at her father. Jackie laughed, “Jessica is so attached to her father.” Sarah patted her lap Jessica came running over. “No,” Meanie shook his head. Jessica began to cry, “Why not Daddy.” “Sit,” he pointed his long fingernail at the seat.


                That night Sarah volunteered to put Jessica to bed. “I can’t believe you are going to be six years old,” she laughed as she ran to bathwater. Jessica took off her shirt, Sarah looked at her back. “Jess, where did you get those scratches?” Jessica hung her head; her long dark brown hair fell in front, “Daddy hits me.” Sarah touched the girls face, “I know.” “Then why doesn’t anybody do anything about it,” she shrugged. “Daddy is a strong guy,” Sarah smiled. “I think, we all get scared of him.”




Chapter 5


                  No Privacy




              The girls took Jessica to a movie, the next night. Meanie sat on the bed, “You wanna do our old stuff?” “Honey we’ve been having sex as much as have always had,” Jackie sighed. Then they began to kiss. “Oooooh,” a pleasurable groan escaped Jackie’s throat. “You make me sooooo happy,” she painted. Meanie pulled away from the sloppy kiss, “I know.” Jackie’s body was sweating like crazy. Meanwhile downstairs the girls came home. “Cool movie huh,” Sarah shrugged. “Yup,” Jess giggled. “Were home,” Sarah yelled. Jackie pulled away. Sarah opened the door, luckily they were under the covers. “Go,” Meanie screamed. Sarah shrugged and left. “I thought they were at the fucking movies,” he groaned. Jackie sighed and hugged him. Then Jessica can bouncing into the room. “Mommy Daddy, guess what movie we saw.” “THAT’S IT, EVERYBODY OUT!!!!!!!!!!” Jessica ran away crying. “Jackie, lock the door.” She obeyed and went back to bed with him. “Get on top of me,” he smiled. Jackie lied down on his warm puffy body. Jackie then heard fighting. She perked her head up. She was about to get up when put his arm around her and rolled over. His keg was on top of her and she was up against his body. Just her luck he was asleep and his leg was pinning her down, so she couldn’t get up.

            Jackie sighed and fell asleep. Meanie opened his eyes and saw his wife cuddled up against him. He pulled his leg off of her, and pulled his hand out from under her naked body. He got up and walked down stairs. He looked at the pictures up on the wall as he walked down the staircase. He stopped and looked at a picture of him and Jackie at their wedding. Jackie wore a long flowing white gown. He sighed and continued downstairs and passed several pictures of the girls. He looked and saw the family portrait. He walked back upstairs, and back to bed. He put his arm around his queen and fell asleep.

I like it, it's really nice! Too bad it's only a story huh?

Yea

Hey nice work i like too

I imagined the children and wife to be all human, and then the dad to be the Chief Blue Meanie..so it had a surreal and crazy tint for me.
Pretty dark issues.

LOL

Chapter 5

                      Demonic Dad


              Rachel sighed as her father screamed his lungs at her. “Do you know what you have done,” he screamed. Rachel looked up and smiled, “I know I interrupted your sex, I know.” Meanie slapped Rachel across the face, leaving red bloody scratches from his nails. For the first time in a while Rachel began to cry, like a little girl. Bloody dripped from her face. She got up to run away. “Come back you little wiseass,” he screamed. Rachel turned around and shot him a glare, “Daddy I’m not 8 years old anymore when you can be me up.” Meanie stopped and tapped his fingers together, “Hmmmm, you really think so,” he laughed sarcastically. He then grabbed her hair and pulled her over to him. “I don’t like your wisecracks,” he growled.

              Then Rachel pulled away, “Dad please.”  Then Jackie walked seductively behind him and grabbed his backside. “Oooooh yea,” he groaned pleasurably.  He turned around and pulled Jackie close to him. Rachel fell down with a thud. Meanie picked Jackie up and began to make out with her. They seriously began to pull off each other’s clothing. Pretty soon there were Meanie’s pants and Jackie’s skirt on the floor. Rachel sat on the couch and laughed as the two sweating creatures kissed and wriggled around under the blanket. Jackie was soaked with sweat. Meanie sat up and Jackie went down. He laughed hysterically. Jackie came back up again, her hair was wild and messy. Jackie sat up and groaned, and kissed his bottom lip. He put his pants back on and got up. Jackie too put her clothing back on. He pulled Jackie close to him and held her like a baby. He gave her a kiss and sighed. “I love you Jacqueline.” Jackie smiled and fell asleep against his blue puffy body.




                              Chapter 6

                      Rachel’s Rebellion


              Sarah’s break was almost over. She packed her things and said her good-byes. After she left, Meanie began to grumble. “I hate the way she just packs up and leaves.” Jackie sighed, “Honey, she has to get on a plane and fly all the way back to The US, she has to leave about a week before school starts.” Rachel sighed and crossed her arms. Meanie then slapped her across the face.” “What the hell did you do that for,” she screamed. Meanie pointed his finger at Rachel, “Don’t you ever talk back to me girl.” Rachel lunged her teeth at his finger. He jumped up and down screaming, “You can’t do that to me.” His voice could be heard all over the house. He gritted his horrible teeth and flashed a finger at Rachel. “I am your father damn it, and you never talk to me like that.” At this point Rachel was on the floor, her tall father leaning over her. He picked her up by the shirt. Red and yellow rings surrounded his pupils. He gritted his teeth together and stamped his foot against the ground. He raised his hand about to scratch Rachel. Jackie then came running between them. At the point, Rachel was scared to death. “Get out of the way,” He pushed Jackie up against the couch. Rachel gave him a glare. “I’m not little Rachel, that you can beat up.” She stormed up the steps, “You can’t tell me what to,” she screamed. He ran up after her and grabbed her arm, and bit her. Rachel screamed, her eyes bugging out. She felt pee dripping down her leg. He finally let go, blood oozing from the wound. Rachel sat on the steps and cried. Meanie smiled evilly and walked away.






                            Chapter 7

   
                      Rachel Possessed Once Again



            The next morning Rachel awoke to Jackie’s footsteps. “Where is your father,” Jackie burst into the room. Rachel shrugged, “I dunno.” She rubbed her head and groaned and walked downstairs. She sat on the couch and turned on the TV. She sat, watching for a while. Then Jackie came down all she saw on Rachel’s head was frizzy uncombed hair. “Rachel?” The girl didn’t move a muscle. Jackie looked at Rachel and screamed. The girl had terrible skin and teeth. Jackie gasped and struggled for breath. “Rachel,” she chocked. The thing turned it’s head backwards, “Hi,” it laughed. Jackie screamed and ran upstairs. Tina yawned and walked downstairs. She saw the back of Rachel’s head. “Rachel, where is dad,” she asked. “I’m right here,” Rachel growled in Meanie’s voice. Tina shrugged and walked over to Rachel. Rachel spun her head Tina ran upstairs screaming. Rachel sat on the couch and laughed hysterically. Jackie heard her husband’s laugh and came speed down and saw her possessed daughter laughing. Jackie ran over and started shaking the laughing girl. “GET OUT OF HER,” Jackie screamed. Rachel smacked Jackie off of her, “I’m sorry my darling,” she laughed. As soon as she regained consciousness, Jackie looked at Rachel. “Why are you infecting our child again?” Rachel’s eyes glowed with anger, “She fucking annoyed me, I’m just teaching her a lesson.” Then the girl ran into the kitchen. Jackie followed her and saw a knife in the girl’s hand. “Hey what are you doing with that?” Rachel sneered, “I’m going to cut her, “ she sneered. She jumped on Jackie and put the knife to her throat. “Meanie darling stop,” she cried. “Nooooooo,” the girl threw back her head and howled. “Not this time,” it growled. Rachel spit green vomit all over Jackie. She ran away up to the bathroom. Her cold dead-looking lips curled into an evil smile. Her horrible teeth flashed. She turned her head around and took the knife and held it up high. Jackie dove down and the knife flew out of her hand. Jackie began pounding the girl against the ground. Secretly the spirit flew out of her and regained its shape. “Jackie still screamed and smacked Rachel against the ground. Then Meanie tapped her shoulder. Jackie turned around and saw her husband. She looked down and saw her daughter face down on the floor. She turned her around and saw that she was back to normal. Rachel opened her eyes and saw her mother, “Mom.” Rachel reached up and hugged her mother. Then her eyes drifted over to Meanie,” “Stay away from me, “ she screamed. Jackie sighed, “Rachel.” “No,” she interrupted, “He needs to stay away from me.” She got up and ran upstairs. Meanie shrugged and Jackie shot him a glare. Rachel took a shower, and stared at herself in the mirror. Right before her eyes, images flashed of her father screaming at them. She closed her eyes and sighed. Her long black her slipped in front of her face.




                        Chapter 8

                  Tender Moments



                  Jessica was almost 6 years old in a few weeks. She was already planning her own party. “Mommy I want it here, “ she pointed at a rather fancy restaurant. Jackie laughed, “Oh honey, that is not for a little girl’s birthday.” Jess hung her head. Jackie looked down at her daughter. “We’ll have a nice party,” she smiled. “Rachel had a fancy party,” she whinned. Jackie sighed, “That was a special occasion for Rachel, she was turning sweet sixteen.” Jessica stamped her foot in anger. “Your just like your father.” Meanie came down and smiled, “Did someone just mention me.” Jessica smiled at her father, “Daddy, can I have my party here.” “No,” Jackie raised her voice. “Excuse me, I wasn’t talking to you,” Jess put her hands on her hips. Jackie picked up Jessica under her arm and carried her up the stairs. She walked into her room and put Jess on her bed. “Don’t talk to me like that,” she scolded her. “You are getting a party, just not there.” Jackie sighed, “Now get into your PJs.” “Pssssst Mom,” Rachel hushed. Jackie walked over to Rachel, “What?” Rachel smiled, “ I like someone.” Jackie laughed, “Do tell.”



                Jackie sat on Rachel’s bed. “Well he’s tall, but not as tall as Dad, he has large brown eyes and well….., here,” she handed Jackie a picture. “He looks good, is he nice,” Jackie wondered. “Well you’ll meet him tonight.” Then the doorbell rang, Rachel who was all dressed up ran downstairs. Rachel introduced him to her family. “Rachel, we have to go out, can you stay here with the girls.” They left and they went up to Rachel’s room. They then sat on her bed. “Ummm, now what Peter,” Rachel laughed. “This,” Peter leaned in close to her. He began to kiss her. Rachel closed her eyes and put her arms around his neck. They fell back on Rachel’s bed. Hours later Jackie and Meanie came home. Rachel and Peter were both nude and struggled to put on their clothing. Rachel poked her head down the stairs. She laughed hysterically; Meanie and Jackie were doing the same thing on the couch. Jackie touched her husband’s face and her head fell back on his body. He was much bigger than her, so her body was in the middle of his. Jackie panted and kissed him once more. He sat up and Jackie curled up against him. She looked up and saw Rachel and smiled. Meanie pulled away from Jackie and saw Rachel. He stood up and Jackie fell to the floor. He smiled and pulled the middle finger on her. She ran upstairs laughing. He looked down at Jackie and picked her up and cradled her. Tears formed in Jackie’s eyes. “I remember the first time I laid eyes on you.” Meanie smiled at his wife, “I remember the first time we kissed.” Jackie felt her mouth pull to his. Tears poured from her eyes, as she tasted him.



                              Chapter 9

                            Rachel’s New Bondage With Her Father



                    Rachel was like her father in many ways. As months went by Rachel’s attitude changed. She wanted tattoos and a piercings. “Mom,” Rachel walked up to her mother one day. “Can I have a nose piercing?” Jackie looked up, “No,” Jackie shook her head. “Uh uh, no.” Rachel sighed, “Come on Mom.” “Rachel, no.” Rachel stamped up the stairs. That night she saw her father in his study. She sat on the couch and sighed. “What do you want,” she heard an angry voice. She looked up at the back of her father. His body over exceeded the chair he was sitting on. Rachel sighed her black hair pulled into a bun. “Daddy, I love you.” Meanie turned around to look at his daughter. “What do you want,” he sighed. Rachel looked up shyly at him, “Nothing.” He pulled the 16 year old onto his lap. “What’s wrong sweetie,” he kissed her cheek. “Am I a badass kid?” Meanie smiled, “No, if anything, I’m the bad one in this family.” Rachel felt tears forming in her eyes. “Daddy I really wanna,” she began to touch her father’s face. He looked into her eyes, “What.” Rachel felt a desire for her father. She then opened her mouth and pulled close to him. He then slapped her, “Rachel that is disgusting.” He pulled her up the stairs, he looked over and saw Jackie lying on the bed. She turned over and called him over. He began to feel hot for Jackie. He dropped Rachel and kissed Jackie tenderly. “You know what Rachel tried to do,” he asked Jackie as they were under the covers. “What,” Jackie groaned with pleasure. “She tried to come onto me.” “That just sick,” Jackie laughed. “You the only one I f***,” Meanie laughed.” Dad, I love you as a father, I’m sorry I did that,” Rachel appeared at the door. Meanie shook his head and laughed. “Now if you don’t mind, “he laid back down and put his arm around Jackie. Rachel sighed and walked away.



              Rachel then began to see her father in a different light. Tina and Jessica would often feel jealous. Surprisingly, so would Jackie. “No get away from him,” Jackie shouted as Rachel hugged her father. She nose-dived at Meanie’s feet. He laughed and picked Jackie up. Jackie glared at Rachel, “Don’t you have a boyfriend or something.” Rachel smiled, “Oh yeah, that’s right, I have to call him back.” Jackie turned and looked at her beautiful blue husband’s face. “I’m sorry, I don’t like sharing you,” she stroked him. “I know,” he smiled. He picked her up and they went upstairs. He laid her on the bed. Jackie smiled and began unbutton her shirt. He put his hand inside and smiled. “Wanna just make out or fool around.” “Fool around, but wait, let me get ready,” Jackie smiled. She went into the bathroom and came out in see-through silk gown. She smiled and walked over to him. “Oooooh take it off,” he groaned seductively. Jackie stood on the bed over him and stripped. She lowered herself down onto him. “Now you.” He took off his boots and pants. Jackie smiled, “I love you,” she groaned. She sat up and he caressed her back. Jackie closed her eyes and laughed. “Can I tie you to the bed, “he laughed. “No,” Jackie smiled. “So what is it like to f*** and nonhuman creature,” he smiled. “Ooooooooh it feels damn good,” she sighed. “What is it like to be you,” she giggled. “Well rest your top half down and…..,” he let out a groan. He put his hands around Jackie’s body and flipped over. Now he was ontop of her. The silk sheets under Jackie’s body were crumpled. Jackie smiled and closed her eyes. Jackie pushed him off and regained control of their sexual activity. She lied down on his body she smiled and giggled. “Oooooooooooooh yes,” she screamed.

                  Rachel was talking on her cell phone to Peter, when she heard Jackie’s screams. She banged on the wall, “Guys keep it down.” Jackie’s body was sweating she was low on breath. She finally collapsed onto her husband. She smiled and his fluffy body surrounded her face. He laughed, “Well that was hot.” Jackie laughed hysterically and began to snore. She fell asleep on top of him. He pulled her off next to him. She groaned and turned over. He decided he didn’t have enough. So he got on top of Jackie and began screwing her in her sleep. Then Jackie opened her eyes and saw him on her. Jackie screamed, “Get off get off.” He fell off of her. Meanie crawled back up on the bed and grabbed her. “Stop please,” she screamed. He laughed his usual evil laugh and began touching Jackie. Then Jackie hysterical laughed. Meanie sat on the bed, Jackie jumped in on top of him. Then they both fell asleep.

                      Chapter 10

                  A Family Tragedy



                    Jackie loved her horses very much. She would go out and ride them early each morning. She was the one who always cleaned out the stables. Then one day Buttercup wasn’t acting right. She ran inside and scheduled an appointment for the sick animal. It turned out that Buttercup had cancer and was to be put to sleep. Jackie came home in tears. “Mom what’s wrong,” Tina came running up to her mother. “Buttercup is gone,” she cried. “Oh no,” Rachel overheard and hugged her mother. Jackie ran away up to the bedroom. She sobbed into her pillow. Meanie came up from his study and slithered onto Jackie. “Please, I’m not in the mood,” Jackie cried from under him. Meanie got up and sat next to her. “Awww what’s wrong darling,” he soothed. “Buttercup died,” Jackie replied flatly. Meanie pulled Jackie in his arms. He rocked her like a baby. “She was so healthy,” Jackie whispered. “I don’t understand, then the doctor told me she had a deadly cancer that would have killed her quicker.”


                Jackie called Sarah on her cell phone and told her the news because it was Sarah’s horse. Sarah sobbed on the other end of the line. “Mom, why?” “I don’t know,” she then hung up. Meanie hugged Jackie and laughed. “What,” Jackie glared at him. “Your fucking happy the horse died,” she screamed. Meanie slapped Jackie. “Listen to me b****, I am more important to you than a fucking animal.” Jackie tried to pull out of his grasp. He stood there laughing deeply as Jackie pulled and pulled. He picked her up and slung her over his shoulder. “Come here my little girl.” Jackie screamed, “Let go of me.” He threw her on the ground of the bedroom. He smiled his huge toothy grin and slithered on the ground over to her. Jackie screamed and he pulled off her shirt. “Please I don’t want it.” He laughed and pulled off her bra. Jackie cried at the pain. He laughed hysterically as blood slipped under Jackie’s body. Jackie sobbed and he kissed her neck. He lip began to bleed because he bit down.


                Chapter 10

              Meanie’s Favorite Food


          Blue Meanie was a meat eater. He loved all forms of meat. One day his taste for a different type of meat. That day Jackie had to go to the store, so she took Jessica with her. Meanie was really hungry he wanted food right now. He searched high and low. He growled angrily and saw Rachel. He smiled evilly at her he began to salivate. “He sucked it in and laughed. “I am very hungry come here sweetie.” Rachel walked over to him. He then grabbed at her. She then ran away and he chanced after her. He then backed her into a corner. Tina could only watch in horror as her sister was ingested. After he was done there was a pool of blood. He burped and sat down on the couch. Tina saw his hands covered in blood. She screamed and ran away. “My sister is gone,” she groaned. Jackie came back about an hour later. “We’re home,” she called. Jessica ran upstairs to her father, “Daddy.” “Hello,” he smiled and gave her a hug. Tina poked her head out from her room. “Rachel,” Jackie called. Meanie came rushing over to Jackie. Jackie smiled, “Okaaay.” They rushed into the bedroom. They were going all the way. “Honey your getting fat,” she laughed. Then they began to kiss. Jackie pulled away, “Your mouth tastes like blood.” He smiled and nervously tapped his fingers together. “Honey what did you eat,” she puzzled. He burped and a piece of black hair flew out of his mouth. Jackie screamed, You You.” “You ate Rachel.” He smiled evilly and crawled on all fours. “Yes and she was scrumptious.” Jackie was frozen with fear. “You you eat humans, you never told me.” Jackie screamed, “Don’t eat me.” He was inches away from her drooling. He laughed evilly he pulled her close to him. “Oooooh Jackie I would never eat you.” He kissed her, Jackie’s eyes opened wide. “f*** me,” he whispered. “OOOOOOOOh YES,” she screamed. “You ate my daughter,” Jackie sobbed. “I was hungry,” he growled. Jackie sobbed into her pillow. “I don’t want to f*** now,” Jackie screamed. Meanie stroked her back, “Ok I will eat you then.” Jackie cried, “Nooooo.” He kissed her and sharpened his nails. “Aaaaaah,” he sighed. “I don’t love you,” Jackie sobbed. Meanie looked away from his fingers, and his large smile shrank into an angry toothy scowl. He scratched her back, Jackie screamed in pain. “He then bit her back, Jackie screamed. “I’m sorry honey, I have a taste for blood and meat.” Jackie screamed and ran to the doorway, “Your sick,” she screamed. “I’m leaving you once and for all.” She ran out, of course he didn’t let his wife get away. “No your not,” he laughed. Jackie kicked him, he howled in pain and Jackie ran. He pointed his finger at her “Stop.” Jackie turned around, “What do you want.” Meanie threw back his head and laughed. He coughed and chocked and an object flew out of his mouth. Jackie looked at it, it was a part of Rachel’s hand. Jackie screamed at the sight of the bloody object.


                    He put his nose to the air and smelled. “Ooooooh I’m hungry.” “You just ate a human being, why should you be hungry,” Jackie screamed. A large devilish toothy smile spread on his face. He looked at Jackie. “No no no,” Jackie screamed. He ran right past her and came back with Jessica. “I’m going to kill off and or eat our children until I get all over your attention.” Jackie screamed, Meanie threw the girl on the bed. Jackie felt as though she was going to vomit. He husband was eating her children. He turned his head and blood dripped from his teeth and lips. He had blood on his nails, he opened his mouth and blood dripped. He smiled viciously and turned back around. Jessica screamed, and Meanie got off the bed. Her daughter was smooched with blood. He had bitten off two of her fingers. Jackie screamed and picked up the child and ran to the ER. Meanie sat on the bed, a pool of blood under him. His hunger grew and he ran downstairs. He found raw meat in the freezer he began gnawing on it. When Jackie came back Jessica was sobbing her arms with an oversized case on her little hand. “I’m leaving you buster,” Jackie scowled as she ran past him. He grabbed her arm and pulled her back, “I don’t think so sexy b****.” She let Jessica go, “Run,” she cried. Jessica ran away screaming up the steps.



                              Chapter 11

                  Rachel’s Shrine


              Jackie and her two remaining children set up a special shrine on top of the fireplace. Jackie, Tina, and Jessica sobbed. Meanie sat on the couch as if he owned the world. He put his legs up onto the chair and laughed. He put his face in his hands and giggled evilly. He fell to the floor kicking and laughing. “You people are so fucking funny,” he laughed. Jackie turned around and scowled at him. He immediately stopped laughing and glared back at her. “Don’t eat anybody else,” Jackie cried. An evil grin spread across his face. “I can do whatever I want.” He pulled Jackie up onto the chair with him. He looked into her eyes. Jackie stared into his cold black eyes. “You have a beautiful face,” he laughed. Jackie smiled and pulled her mouth towards his. “You kissing a man who ate your daughter, her skeleton is rotting in his intestines,” Tina screamed. Jackie sighed happily and fainted into him. She smiled and sat on him. She looked into his eyes and giggled. Tina rolled her eyes, “She is digesting in his gut. Still they ignored her and smiled and flirted with each other. He picked Jackie up and carried her upstairs.


            Jackie ran into the bedroom, and jumped on the bed. She patted the silk sheets. He came running over and sat next to her. They began kissing and fumbling for each other’s clothing. Jackie giggled and laughed. “Ooooh you’re tickling me.” “So you’re not leaving me,” he stroked her face. “No,” Jackie smiled dreamily at him. He smiled and played with her hair. He wrapped a stand around hi nail. She snuggled into his body. “So your not mad at me,” he smiled. “No,” Jackie cooed. “You are getting kind of chubby though,” she continued. “Well I did eat a human being,” he giggled. “Why don’t you want to eat me,” Jackie giggled. He sighed, “I only want to eat you in a sexual way.” “I love you too much.” Jackie put her forehead to his and giggled. They were under the covers laughing hysterically. He was huge compared to Jackie. Jackie lied on top of him, she smiled. “I’m one lucky guy,” Meanie laughed. Jackie blushed, “You are also beautiful.” Once again their mouths met and kissed. Jackie sighed, she fell back onto the pillow. She laid her arm against her forehead. “Jackie, I love you and I would never ingest you.” Jackie continued to kiss him.



                        Chapter 12


                Sarah’s Home


                  It was once again another college break for Sarah. Of course Jackie and Blue Meanie were not prepared to tell Sarah about what happened to her sister. “Okay she is coming about 5pm,” Jackie sighed while running around fixing up the house. “Honey we are going out to dinner tonight,” Jackie told her husband. She turned to Tina and Jessica, “Whatever you do don’t say what happened to Rachel.” They nodded their heads. “Ok,” she collapsed on a near by chair. Tina and Jess ran up to their rooms. Meanie walked over to Jackie, “Honey calm down,” he laughed. “How am I suppose to tell Sarah that my daughter was eaten.” He put his arm around her, “I’ll tell ya who is gonna be eaten tonight.” Jackie smiled and kissed him. Then they saw a car park in the house’s courtyard. “Ok guys,” she laughed as Tina and Jess came down. She swung the door open, and saw her daughter getting out of the car. “Sarah,” she smiled. “Hello,” Sarah laughed. She ran up and hugged her mother. “Oooooh I wised you,” she pulled away. “You grew your hair.” Sarah nodded. “Oh it’s lovely,” Jackie laughed. “Hey baby girl,” Meanie smiled as he saw Sarah. “Daddy,” Sarah ran up and hugged her father. He gave her a kiss and led her into the house. “You can put your stuff in your room.” Sarah went upstairs and went past Rachel’s room. She looked in and saw boxes on top of the bed. Sarah shrugged and walked in to her room. She smiled as she saw a big banner that read: Welcome Home Sarah. She put her stuff on the bed. She came downstairs and saw Jessica. “Ooooh Jess,” she hugged her little sister. “Where is Tina?” “Heyyyyyy,” she turned around and saw Tina with a short black skirt and a pink shirt. She gave Sarah a hug. “Come on guys, we are suppose to be at the restaurant in 10 minutes, come on,” Jackie rushed. “Yay,” Jess ran past her. “Mom, where is Rachel,” Sarah puzzled. Jackie nearly dropped the glass cup she was holding. “Umm, she is sleeping over a friend’s house,” Jackie recovered. “Oh,” Sarah smiled. “I like your dress Mom.” “Although isn’t it little revealing?” Jackie laughed, “Oh, your father picked it out.”


                That night Sarah was walking around the house and saw the shrine to Rachel. “Mom, why is there a shrine to Rachel.” Sarah sat her parents down on the couch. Jackie laughed nervously, “We love her.” Meanie shook his head and laughed hysterically. “Dad?” Jackie cried, “Your father ate her.” Sarah gasped, “No,” she whispered. Meanie tapped his fingers on his stomach. “Yup and she was delicious.” Sarah felt as though she was about to vomit. “You digested your own daughter,” Sarah screamed. “Yes,” he laughed loudly. Sarah sat on the chair and put her hands on her face. “This can’t be happening,” she whispered. Sarah ran upstairs and slammed the door. He put his feet on the couch and laughed to himself. Sarah sat on her bed and cried. Then she heard a knock on the door. “If you’re my insane meat-eating father don’t come in,” she cried. “It’s me,” Jackie whispered. Sarah sniffled, “Come in.” Jackie opened the door and sat on her bed. “Sarah I know…..” “Mom,” Sarah stopped her. Jackie sighed and turned around to look at Sarah. “Why didn’t you stop him,” Sarah whispered. “I wasn’t home, I went food shopping.” Jackie sighed, “Tina was there.” Sarah got up and stormed over to the staircase. “Christina,” Sarah screamed. Tina came up the stairs, “Yeah?” Sarah walked back and sat on the bed. “Shut the door.” Jackie and Tina sat on the bed. “Did you see Dad eat Rachel?” Tina felt tears forming in her eyes, “Yes.” Sarah sat up and looked at Tina. “Why didn’t you stop him?” Tina hung her head, “I was afraid to.” “Christina, did you see him eating her,” Sarah screamed. “Yes,” Tina cried. “He just devoured her, he backed her into a corner.” “There was blood everywhere.” Tina looked up, “And she was gone.” Tear poured from her eyes. “Mom, when did he tell you,” Sarah’s eyes shifted to her mother. “Fucking me.” “How did he tell you?” “He has a hold over me, he kissed me and he asked me if I was angry with him and I said no.” Sarah hung her head. “I love your father with all my heart, just the way he touches me.” “I can’t leave him.” “He is such as sexy man, as a matter of fact I’m getting the hots for him now.” “Sarah, have you ever met someone who is just so irresistible.” Jackie began to drool. “Our sex feels sooooo good.” Sarah then began to laugh. “That is why I am still with this man, I love him to death.” “With him I would do anything, even even.” Jackie broke down and cried, “He ate my daughter.” “Oooooh Sarah he ate your sister.” She sat on the floor and laughed, “Meanie if you can hear me,” she screamed. “I love you, but why did you eat my child.” She began to rip off her clothing. “Stop,” she screamed. “He is making me do this.” She sat on the floor and cried. “I love you damn it,” she cried. “I’d go crazy if I didn’t have you.” She walked into her bedroom. She set on candles, as if it were a ritual. She lied naked on top of her bed. Meanie walked upstairs to go to the bathroom and looked inside the bedroom. “Oooooh baby,” he laughed. “Shut the door,” she said calmly. “You have it all set up.” He sat on her, and started. Jackie lied there motionless, “Your thrusts are wonderful.” She looked at him he was sitting on her. “The more meat you eat, the more powerful you are,” she chanted. “My child’s carcass lies in your gut.” Jackie sat up and put her arms around him. She got on top of him and began breathing heavily. “Your love is so unique,” she continued. “Let’s make love darling.” “Um we are,” he laughed. “I want you in your devil form.” “I am baby,” he laughed. “Make me groan,” she groaned.






                          Chapter 13

            Jackie’s 24 Hour Split


              Sarah, Tina, and Jessica decided to see what Jackie would be like being away from Meanie for 24 hours. That day they would go to London and stay in a hotel. Jackie gave her husband a kiss. Then they drove off. Meanie laughed, “That girl won’t last one day without me.” Jackie pulled into the hotel parking lot. “Okay guys we’ll check in then go have some lunch.” Jackie was doing fine until that night.

                They had a suite, so Jackie would be sleeping by herself. Sarah, Tina, and Jessica had separate beds. Jackie secretly took out a picture of her husband and began French kissing it. “Oooooh baby, I miss you so much my  master.” Tina and Sarah heard her cries. “Mom, you kissing a picture of Dad,” Tina puzzled. “Yes, I….I….I,” she stuttered. “I miss your father, I can’t even forget his beautiful face.” Sarah shook her head. The next day, they started for home. Jackie burst in the door. “Honey I’m home,” she called. There was no answer. “Maybe hez cheating on you,” Sarah laughed. Jackie shot Sarah a glare. “Honey,” Jackie called again. She went upstairs and saw him sleeping. She quietly crept downstairs. “He is asleep,” she laughed. A few minutes later she heard someone clunking down the stairs. “Jackie,” he groaned. He opened his hands to give her a hug. Jackie ran over to him and she jumped into his arms. They kissed for a long time. “Your right baby, I can’t live without you,” Jackie gasped for air.


                Jackie sat on the couch alone the next morning. Meanie took the girls out for the day. Jackie sighed and lowered her head. “We need a dog,” Jackie thought out loud. The girls and their father wouldn’t be back until that night. “Hmmmmm,” Jackie tapped her chin and smiled. That night Meanie pulled the car in. Sarah rang the doorbell. “Why the hell are you ringing the doorbell,” Meanie laughed. Jackie answered the door. “Hi, how was your day,” she beamed. “Darling, what is that your holding,” he pointed out. Jackie smiled under the blanket, a golden retiever puppy stuck it’s head out. “Doggie doggie,” Jessica giggled. Everyone huddled around the dog, except Meanie. They all pilled onto the couch. “What is it,” Sarah laughed. Jackie smiled, “Girl.” “Hey, how about you guys take the puppy upstairs,” Jackie handed it to Sarah. They all ran upstairs. Meanie growled, “You bought a dog.” Jackie’s smile disappeared, “Yes I bought a dog.” “Why, you got a problem with that?” “Yes, he’ll tear up my boots, and your stuff and,” he steamed. “Don’t you ever think about anyone but yourself,” Jackie stormed into the kitchen. “What???” “Ok, you bought it for yourself,” he growled. Jackie felt tears of anger in her eyes she whirled around. “My favorite pet died, the kids wanted a dog, so I though hmmmmmm a dog is a great idea.” “How cares about your fucking horse,” he boomed. Jackie slapped him across the face, “I do.” He grabbed her hand and bit her finger. Jackie screamed and kicked him. “Dinner is ready, please call the girls,” she snapped. She ran cold water over the wound.




                          Chapter 13


                    Deadly Fury



            Blue Meanie defiantly had anger issues. Jackie wanted to send him to a shrink. He would refuse and tell Jackie to f*** off every time she mentioned it. Sarah was going back to college that week. So she finally confronted her father. “Dad why are you always so angry,” she sighed. “What is this, a fucking interview,” he then stormed away. Sarah shook her head and followed him. Meanie looked behind him and saw Sarah following him. “Get off my back,” he screamed. Still, Sarah ignored him. “Why did you eat Rachel,” she cried. Meanie turned around and smacked Sarah to the ground. Sarah sat on the floor in disbelief. Meanie stood over her and laughed. “Don’t you ever mess with me again,” he laughed evilly. Sarah sat on the couch and sighed. Jackie came in carrying a can of soda. “Where is your father?” Sarah sighed and pointed into his study. She smiled and crawled over to him. She crawled under his desk. “Ooooooh,” he groaned. He looked down and saw his wife. “Come here you frisky little….,” he laughed. Jackie laughed and ran away. Meanie flashed a huge smile. “Now where is she?”  Jackie giggled in the closet. He lied on the bed. Jackie slowly crawled over to the bed. “Honey,” she whispered. Meanie looked over the bed. “Oooooh there you are sexy,” he laughed. Jackie felt her heart melt. She sat on the side of the bed and rested her chin on her arms. “Soooo, anything on your mind?” Meanie let out a long sigh, “You don’t miss Rachel.” Jackie smiled, “Yes I do but not that much now.” He nodded his head and looked into her eyes. “What about me turns you on,” he laughed. “Well just you…..,” she laughed. He pulled her up onto the bed. Jackie sat next to her husband. He put his large hand on top of hers. He began to pull up her skirt. “No,” Jackie stopped his hand. Meanie felt himself getting angry. He then threw her against the bed and sat on top of her. Jackie managed to get away. He growled and grabbed her arm, “I didn’t say to go,” he screamed. “f*** me,” he kissed her ear. Jackie turned her head away. “I thought you said I turn you on,” he stroked her arm with his nail. “You do, I just don’t feel like sex tonight.” Meanie’s mouth twisted into an angry scowl. He held her face against himself. “Eat me,” he screamed. Jackie pulled away from him, “Sometimes you can be soooo sick.” His hand twisted into a fist. “Eat me or…,” he held his fist up to her face. Jackie pushed his hand away, “Stop controlling me,” she cried. He then slapped her and caused her to fall off the bed. She rubbed her head and looked up and saw him coming at her. She rolled out of the way. He fell to the floor with a crash. He then grabbed Jackie’s leg. She crashed to floor with a squeal. He then got on top of her and laughed. Jackie cried and struggled. Her husband was much stronger than her. “Ow you’re hurting me,” she cried. He sighed and got off her and pushed her into the walk-in closet. He moved closer to her. Jackie screamed in the darkness. Sarah was in her room reading a book when she heard Jackie’s screams. Sarah put the book down and walked into their room. She looked in and saw no body there. She saw their closet door closed. She put her ear against the door, no screams. Sarah twisted the doorknob and pushed the door open. She walked into the dark closet. She felt herself trip on something. She looked down and saw her father’s boot. She heard something in the back of the closet. She walked back and someone jumped at her. Sarah screamed and fell, she opened her eyes and saw Jackie with a bloody face. “Sarah please,” she cried. “Get help.” Sarah’s lip quivered, “What happened.” “Your father’s evil streak,” she choked on her blood. Jackie heard footsteps, “Get out go get help.” Sarah nodded and ran out. Jackie prayed to herself. Then she heard a scream. Meanie came into the closet hold Sarah by her throat. Sarah chocked and tried to get out of his grip. He let her go, Sarah stumbled and ran away. She ran downstairs and cried. Jackie fell down at her husband’s feet. “Please no more.”





                    Chapter 14

                A Trip Down Memory Lane



            Jackie sighed as she looked through photo albums. She saw pictures of Sarah as a baby. There was one picture of Sarah holding Rachel. Then she picked up her and Meanie’s photo album. There was one with them eating ice cream, and another of them kissing. Jackie sighed and flipped through it. Tears formed in her eyes. She saw another one with her in a bikini on the beach with him. She remembered how when they used to date, Meanie was so wonderful and good to her. “Why can’t he still treat me like that,” she wondered. She sighed and took out the picture of him kissing Jackie’s cheek. Meanie was still in bed sleeping. Jackie put the picture on his desk in his study. Hours later he finally awoke. He yawned and walked downstairs into his study. He saw the picture and smiled, “I was much thinner then,” he smiled. He walked into the kitchen expecting to see his breakfast on his place on the table. When didn’t see it he groaned, “Jackie!!!!!” There was no answer. He looked out side and saw Tina and Sarah playing volleyball, and Jessica and Jackie down by the stables. He walked out the backdoor. He walked past the girls and down to the stables. “Mom are we getting another horse,” Jessica asked as she was brushing Demon. “Yes, in the summer we will,” Jackie nodded. “Hi honey,” she waved to Meanie. He gave her a kiss, “Where is my breakfast?” “Oh sorry, you woke up late, so we decided to groom the horses,” Jackie laughed. She got up onto the saddle. “Come on honey, let’s ride them.” Meanie climbed up onto Demon, “Ok.” The both rode off down the hill, Jackie on Brownie.


              Later, Meanie and Jackie sat on the couch. “Honey, why did you leave that picture on my desk?” Jackie sighed, “Because I wanted to remind you of how you used to treat me.” Meanie shrugged, “What. I don’t treat you well?” “Well, um…no,” she sighed. “You beat me,” she cried. Meanie put his hand around Jackie. “Oh darling, I’m so sorry, but that is just who I am, a nasty evil dictator.” Tears poured from Jackie’s eyes. Meanie gave her a kiss on the cheek. “I love you Jacqueline.” Jackie smiled and leaned against him. He looked down at her and smiled. They then looked at the photo albums. “I’m so thin here,” he laughed. “Well you’re eating a lot,” she sighed. “Your face and legs are a lot heavier.” “Damn you haven’t changed a bit,” he laughed. Jackie sighed, “I just don’t want you to beat me.”




                        Chapter 15


                  No More On the Market


                Meanie’s medicine was being taken off the market. This was good news to Jackie’s mind. Meanie of course was pissed off beyond belief. “They can’t fucking do this to me,” he screamed. Jackie just sat there and smiled. He sat down and sighed. She began to touch is leg, “We can still screw around with out your nasty stuff.” He smiled, “True.” “Maybe we can have more fun together.” “Yes, but the medicine is what makes me want sex all the time,” he laughed. Jackie looked on the back,” There are no sexual side effects.” “I guess you are hot because that is just you.” He gave Jackie a kiss and put his hand around her. Jackie looked up at him, “After it is cleaned out of your system, can we have another baby,” she gazed at him. He looked at her and smiled, Maybe.” Jackie got up, “Honey, why did we leave Pennsylvania, I miss our old house.” Meanie sighed, “I enjoy England as much as you do.” “Do we still own the house?” “Yup, good think we never put it up to sale.”



                  They called a family meeting, the kids agreed. They would move back to PA, USA.



                    Weeks Later


                      Jackie stood in the backyard and smiled. She walked inside. “I’m so glad to be back.” She went upstairs and saw a missing room, where Rachel’s room used to be. They had their own cars back. Meanie loved his Christine (the Plymouth). Jackie was happy to see her BMW again. For Sarah, it was a short drive to college, so she decided to come home everyday. Jackie decided to buy another horse for the other two. She bought a nice Thoroughbred and named it Rachel after her daughter. They then decided to have another baby to replace their ingested one. Meanie was much nicer to them, a better father. Their sex was the same just not violent. Jackie was pregnant once again.




                      Chapter 16

             
            The Lie


            Since Meanie was no longer angry at the world, he was much happier. Jackie still made him aroused. Their sex was not violent. That night they decided to make a baby. They wanted it to be special. Jackie kicked off her high-heels he pulled off his boots. They sat by the pool for the first part. Jackie looked at the stars and took a sip of champagne. Meanie picked her up and brought her upstairs on the bed. They quickly pulled off their clothing. Later, they both panted from exhaustion. “Well,” Jackie smiled. “We have such beautiful children.” Meanie smiled, “Yes, Sarah and Tina look alike.” Jackie kissed her husband and lied down. “Goodnight,” she yawned. Now normally he would beat her up and want more. He yawned and fell asleep.


                Sarah came home from college one day to see no body around. “Hello,” she called. Tina was in her room watching TV. Sarah walked up and saw her, “Hey.” Tina looked up, “Oh, hi.” “Where is everybody,” she laughed. Tina smiled, “Mom and Dad are out with the horses, and Jessica is at a friend’s house.” Sarah walked into her room on the computer. Meanwhile, Meanie and Jackie walked inside. Jackie walked into the kitchen, “I’m going to make dinner.” Meanie pulled her close to him, “I lied,” he flashed a large horrible smile. “What,” Jackie sighed. “I make my own medicine.” Jackie gasped and fell on the floor. “Or Max makes it for me.” “I’m still a bad guy.” Jackie felt tears pour down her face. He picked her up and laughed. Jackie began to cry, “I really thought you changed.”


              Today, family was coming, Jackie’s nephews Peter and Steven. They were Meanie’s brother’s children. The boys would be staying with them for a few weeks.




              Jackie went to the airport to pick up the kids. Jackie came back with them. “Hello,” Jackie called. Steven made a hilarious entrance. “Hey peoples,” he spat in a stupid voice. Jessica came down the stairs; she was as old as them now. “Hi guys,” she laughed.




                            Chapter 17

                    Jackie’s New Little Angel/NOT



              Jackie had her new baby while the boys were staying there. Jackie came home from the hospital with a bundle in her arms. She sat on the couch, “Hello,” she called. Tina poked her head down the stairs, “Oh hi, the baby,” she squealed. She called everybody down. Meanie sat on the couch next to her. “Let me see my new offspring,” Jackie gave him the baby. The boys and Tina looked at the baby. Tina screamed and ran upstairs followed by Peter and Steven. The baby was all Meanie from head to toe, absolutely no characteristics of Jackie. It’s big black eyes looked up at Jackie. “Well I think he is adorable,” Jackie kissed her new baby. “I named him, Jeremy William.”


                    That night, Jackie woke up to a scream. She rushed into Rachel’s old room, which was now a sky blue. She picked up the crying infant. “Awwwww,” she began to rock him in the baby swing. He fell back to sleep. Jackie then crawled back into bed. Peter and Steven slept in the guest room and heard the crying. “I don’t understand, our 4 kids all look like a mixture of you and me, and now our 5th child looks only like you,” Jackie laughed. “Well, Jessica is all you, I don’t see me in her,” he smiled. “Yes, she does.” “She has you hair, your eyes, where am I,” he laughed. Jackie shrugged and lied up against him. He began to kiss her neck, and stroked his fingernail against her arm. He put his thick leg over. At this point Jackie was pinned down. She closed her eyes and smiled. “Oh sweetie, aren’t our offspring beautiful,” she sighed. He played with her hair, he sighed and pulled her up to him. Jackie put her head next to him. She put her hand next to his chin. “I love you,” she butterfly kissed him. “Did you have any other girlfriends before me?” He shook his head, “Nope, you’re my one and only.” Jackie nodded and pulled her hand away. She pulled at her mini skirt. “Take it off,” he whispered in her ear. Jackie smiled and changed into her pjs. She brushed her teeth and crawled onto the bed. They were about to put their mouth together when Jackie heard a cry. “I’ll go get him,” Meanie got up. Jackie smiled and picked up a book. She closed the curtains that hung around their huge canopy. She took off her clothing and put in a diaphragm. He came back with the baby. He opened the curtains and crawled in. Jackie put the baby to her chest and breast-fed him. He burped and babbled, she got up and put him to bed. When she came back, Meanie lied on his side and patted the bed.


              Jeremy was defiantly his father inside and out. The kid screamed and cried. His mouth was always open. He was on his back kicking a baby toy. “Hey kid,” Peter crawled up to him. Jeremy waked him on the head with his hand. “Ow,” Peter pulled away. The baby took on look at Peter and screamed. Jackie came running down, “What, honey,” she picked up the baby. He then vomited all over Peter. “Oh Jeremy,” Jackie scolded. “Peter go wash up.” Peter ran upstairs to the bathroom. Jackie put her son in the play pin. He spat the pacifier out across the room. Jackie sighed and leaned over, she retrieved it for the baby. He giggled, and opened his mouth for it. When Jackie turned her back he spit it out again. Jackie felt it hit her back, she put the pacifier in her mouth and stuck it in his. Once again it went flying across the room. “I’m not getting that,” Jackie shook her head. Jeremy then began to cry. She walked up the stairs leaving the crying infant. Then Meanie came downstairs. “Hey, kid.” He picked up the baby and brought him upstairs. Meanwhile Jackie lied on the bed exhausted. Then she heard the baby babbling, she groaned and turned over.

pretty surreal stuff. and steamy.

but well-written. are you planning on becoming a writer?

I want to be a pediatrician, but I want to be a novelist on the side.

If anyone likes my story I'll post more, but it gets very graphic.