Yes , its a forum
It has my storys on it , or story as, i tend to think its a book of sorts .
Please have a look and a read , it has been put together by Kaldiscope Eyes , who is on here , and i hope i will one day be rich and famous and knock that book called The Bible off its best seller of all time , anyway i`m ahead of myself .
I have never wrote anyrthing like this before , the character , i just came up with on here , when i had a thread , which was like a chat show .
Yeh, its mad stuff and they get better as they go on ,as i grow with confidence each one i write
The storys  are funny , and educational in time travelling , unexplained , and how to make a good brew .
Hope you have a look , and even maybe join !,

http://www.betterthantv.proboards67.com/

Ta  

BUMP!!  

you should post them on here!

Thats a good point there Beatles rock , but as i have a Forum to put them on , i can see who is reading them , and get feedback off people , hopefully  
I have them already on a Beatle related forum and though a lot of people read them , i dont get any feedback    

i think they're really good!!!

Thank you so much the Beatles rock on  

Quoted from mr kite

I have never wrote anyrthing like this before , the character , i just came up with on here , when i had a thread , which was like a chat show .

Are we in it?

John, I've read about Albert before! You should change the colour of that forum, I had to put my shades on for the first time this year!!

Did you consider that a blog might have been better for that kind of thing?

Good luck though, I will read some more when I get the time.

Allez les bleu!!

BlueMeanie is right Mr. Kite that blue made my eye's go wonky after reading the first two stories . Your writing reminds me a bit of Sue Townsend " Adrian Moles Diary " . I think your main Characters are strong and there dialogue is humorous . Maybe you need to be a little more descriptive of their world , i think the landscape needs a few more brush strokes . A bit like Tolkien did when he was describing Bilbo's hobbit hole , that description made me want to live in that world .
Hope that's useful Mr .Kite , i will read some more and get back to you . And don't forget to excel yourself

Seems like a lot of fun. You certainly love your commas - I found most of the sentences a bit long and your grammar is a bit wonky (but maybe you do that on purpose for effect.) I can imagine people getting in to this so good luck.

Thank you all very much for your time and comments , i appreciate it  

As i have said before i have never done anything like this before , and i have found it very hard when writing the buggers  down , as i`m just a poor working class boy , i didnt really have a good education[ the only thing i learnt was to play football]   , so i have no grammer , cant spell , and when it comes to commas and the other thingys well .  
Ok you can put the hankies away now  
BUT !
As for my imagination and sense of humour !, well i think they are worth a read .  
The storys do get better and longer , so i have improved a lot , i have tried to be more descriptive , ta DaveRam  
I just started out as a bit of fun and i really have enjoyed doing them and i hope you get to read a few .
Cheers B.M, i know you have had the pleasure before , and i will sort out the blue , not my fav colour at the mo .  
C+ then , could do better , and i will do my best .
Not bad for a poor working class northerner eh !

Ta People .    John .    

Not bad for a poor working class lad indeed!!!

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Mr Dylan knew Albert , he said he was inspired by Albert to write Subterrain Homesick Blues  

I think we should ban you for spamming!!

Aw no .