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[somedude210]

i wrote two more that you wouldve enjoyed, but they're currently mailed to her

[Kaleidoscope_Eyes]

Its amazing what people come up with on the way home from work while spotting people runing on the botanical gardens...

Some People

Some people run in the park
Some people do things in the dark
Some people sniff glue
But we all do what we wanna do

Some people are sad
Some people are good, some are bad
Some people strike
But we all do what we like

Some people cry
Some people touch the sky
Some people laugh
But we all what we love

Some people write songs
Some people are never wrong
Some people never lose
But we all do what we choose (to do)

Some people like to roll
Some people wanna be tall
Some people are women some are men
But we all do what we can

Some people are like me
Not knowing which category
Of People they belong to
Is it the same with you?

There are different types of people
But I think we can all agree
It's love and free will
That binds us together and makes us happy.

[somedude210]

its been a real long time since i wrote anything. so heres my first foray back into it in a long long time, enjoy:

Its been awhile,
Since I penned a poem,
Went through my file,
Of the old ones I wrote,
With you as my inspiration,
I bet I won't choke,

Eight long months,
Seems like a lifetime to me,
Eight long months,
Feels so divine, you see,
Without you in my life,
I'm stuck dealing with me,

Oh along the road,
We've had our bumps and bruises,
But that never changed the way I felt,
Never changed how I saw you,

May the world be alight,
May the mountains crumble,
May the oceans dry,
May every conceivable bad thing happen in one day
I'll still be there,
Holding the light,
To find your way out,

Enlighten me,
Into your heart,
Frighten me,
From the ways that are dark,
Accept me,
For what I have wronged,
Show me,
The woman I have longed,

May the world break,
And may their hearts ache,
And may I smile everyday,
Knowing you're by my side,
Allowing us to take it in stride,
And may all the world know,
How I feel for you this day,
And how I wouldn't want it any other way,
For you are the love of my life,
The Yoko to my John,
My guiding light

[Indica]

After Prom thing i wrote

Sleep now,
So sweetly, rest,
As you lay your weary head,
Upon my chest  ...


Soppy - but it flows well I would have changed the song half way through to reveal that she's gone or maybe dead, and that what you describe can only be a dream/wish. Cynical ... but that's me ... haha  :-/

[somedude210]

hahaha, well im not depressing like that *looks back at past lyrics*...oh, right....i am

[Whoever]

I write things when I'm out, by the time I get home I'll forget it, then I'll go out 6 months later and recall it...

Quote.

[Whoever]

I think theres a song in that quote...

Quote.

[Kaleidoscope_Eyes]

That's a beautiful poem Somedude! (long time no talk, by the way)

I can get pretty cynical in poems , but then i re-read my poem and i think "oh thats crap dont be so sad"  :-/

You used to write good poems whoever (unless im thinking of someone else...)

[somedude210]

Another Day - Wrote it tonight for my girlfriend's birthday. first i've written since i posted on here last. its kinda duety, bolded being me and italics being her, except for the last verse which is both of us

...yes im sappy, ive come to peace with that...

Driving the long road home,
Another day gone by,
Another hug goodbye,
Another time we cry,

Tonight, I lie awake,
Staring into the vastness of my mind,
Seeing you at every corner,
Wishing you a safe journey home.

Headlights flash,
Like the twinkle in your eyes,
Like the spirit lifted in me,
Like the words you say to me,

[Kaleidoscope_Eyes]

How lovely! How did the girlfriend react?  
Been a while since I heard from you, Sommie. How's you been?

[somedude210]

hahaha, as she put it, she was starting to tear up and was trying so hard not to cry because her roommate was nearby, and then stated that i was absolutly wonderful.

i've been doing well, i started my second year at college. dont ever go into engineering unless you dont mind math. even then, its a pain.

how have you been KE? I've missed our wonderful conversations

[somedude210]

My girlfriend ranted about how her sister got everything she gets in life, and how her mother treats my girlfriend like crap over the same things, so i wrote this to cheer her up. Her family is the black-sheep of her grandparents, and since shes the black-sheep of hers, we joke how she's a cow-sheep. that explains the last lines


Oh darling,
I know you're feeling down,
As if you've been cheated,
But darling,
You don't need to feel sad,
Look around you,
Look inside you,
You still have everything you've ever had,

There are times you want to scream,
Days where you could kick a puppy,
People you wish you didn't know,
But you don't need to,
What you haven't found,
Is what's always been there,

Days suck,
People are a pain,
You could kick and scream,
Remember who you are,
What you have,
And you'll see that you have more,
Then they ever will,

Some people are spoilers,
Some people are spoiled,
Some people get pushed around,
Some people are the pushers,

Hold you're head up high,
Get out of your funk,
Lift up your spirits,
Climb out of your bunk,
There's a whole world to see,
A whole world away from prying eyes,
A world for just you and me,

Look at the glass half-full,
See what you have,
Live for the life you have,
Cheer up,
At least you're a Cow-sheep,
Instead of a Black sheep like them,

[somedude210]

Meditation:

My hands tingle,
The thoughts are thrown,
Smooth beads jingle,
Blood encased in stone,

And I pray for thee,
To find that one true love,
And I pray for me,
To mend a forgotten soul,

Mantras ringing,
The mind is awake,
A thousand monks singing,
I feel it through me,

Wake up this morning,
Thought I was alive,
Felt so nice and happy,
When my life took a dive,

And I listen to the birds,
Who sing of beasts,
And I listen to my mind,
Who cries out for peace,

Lives are never touched,
Lives can never feel,
The world we know is imperfect,
The feelings are all real,

Walked the line,
And dirt filled path,
Never lied before,
Saw the beauty of our world,
And the horrors of our wars,

Take me to the holy scrolls,
Show me the way,
Walked along another path,
Day after day,

You and I,
Have been through hell,
Saw it just the other day,
Still we're willing,
To give it away,

Oh shepherds come today,
Take my flock away,
Teach them how to live,
Show them what you preach,

Take my hands,
Make them clean,
Rid them of the blood,
Untouched by man again,

Feel your skin,
Clean and smooth,
Despite what you may think,
Its only in your head,

Oh lord,
Forgive me for my sins,
Shelter me from the winds,
Help me when I'm pinned,

And if the world goes down,
Will he wash it all away?
And if I just fall down,
Will you help me back again?

Blessed are the meek,
That take my plans,
Blessed are the weak,
That break my hands,
Blessed are the blind,
Who follow the light,
Blessed are the souls,
Who are far too bright,
Blessed are the friends,
Who stay by and true,
Blessed are rare,
Like me and you,
Blessed are the fair,
Like me and you...

Friendship:

Time ticks away,
The moment passes,
The phone sits,
Idly, waiting for that ring,

How do you tell her?
How do you let her know?
You've given her everything,
Happiness, love, understanding
A friend,

Friendship, love and understanding,
Should never be a condition,
Relationships come and go,
but those stay eternal,

You made her laugh,
You made her sing,
Be happy with that,
She lifted her standards for you,
She allowed you into her life,
And you made it better,

Don't underestimate your power,
Don't feel you can't do right,
You are one of the only ones,
Who can see the light,

You feel like sh*t now,
Thats okay, friend,
All things must pass,
All things must adjust,

Follow your heart,
You won't be disappointed,
Listen to the advice you give,
You won't be sad,

Take a look around you,
You've experienced something few will ever know,
Funny how it is now,
You're blind by your own anger,

Anger turned inward,
Leads to inner war,
Take a breath,
Calm down,
You don't need to be like this,
You'll find your path,

Dear friend,
Remember this,
Relationships come and go,
Friendships are eternal,

[somedude210]

Where did it all go wrong?

Can you hear my heart,
Thumping on the floor,
Can you see what I've become,
A shell of my former self,
My soul is aching,
My heart feels nothing,

Looking back,
How foolish I was,
To think that this was perfect,
To think that I was happy,

You betrayed me,
You promised me,
You said you loved me,
Now you say that to him,

My heart aches for you,
My mind wants it all back,
Where did it all go wrong?
When did I lose you?

You seem to forget,
What it felt like for you,
When he did this to you,

Did you miss him,
Like I miss you?
Did he take something from you,
Like you took something from me,

You seem so cold,
Do you need my heat?
Feel my warmth flow through you,
Or does he fill that need now?

You told me you love me,
You told me you wanted me,
You told me you wanted to stay,
Yet here I am,
Alone,
Without so much as a passing glance from you,
Without more than two words,

Are you afraid of me?
Well the damage is done,
You did it quick,
Gently turning the handle,
Taking me closer to pain,

I love you,
or at least I did,
You wanted to stay friends,
But you do nothing to that end,

We're one-sided now,
Our ying is no longer with yang,
What goes through your mind,
When you see me like this?
When you hear me cry out your name?
And refuse to do anything about it?

Where did it all go wrong...

[somedude210]

10pm, the fans keep moving,
My head is aching,
I wish I would die,
I thought about it,
Many times before,
I thought about what'd it be like,
To walk out that door,

Tomorrow I wouldn't be here,
Tomorrow I'd be happy,
In a world without pain,
In a life I could sustain,

There are no guarantees in life,
There are no promises you can always keep,
There is no such thing as love,
There is no such thing as life,

A darling she was,
Never even swore,
She told me tonight,
To go die, you a**hole,

12am, fast asleep in my mind,
Wondering what to do with my life,
Wondering why she agreed,
To someday be my wife,

These days keep coming back to me,
Some days are better than others,
Some days keep me alive,
Others make me wish I would die,

She made me see the light,
And a cold one at that,
She made me wonder about myself,
She made me think outside myself,

There were people I never thought I had,
People that I thought were just a passing fad,
People I can say, I'm glad to be with now,
People who kept my head up, when I tried to drown,

3am, Time slowly ticks away,
There is a life after death,
But no reason to seek it now,
I lost what I wish I didn't
Burned what I wish I put out,

People were there for me,
People inspired me,
To pull myself from this self-doubt,
Pull myself from my depression,

If I'm ever going to make it back,
I have to make a good impression,
I worried that I'd become cold as ice,
I almost was, I could feel the frost form,

It took awhile, but I made it out,
I look to the horizon,
My trust renewed,
I may have lost her,
But I didn't lose the one,

[Mellotroniac]

I don't really have a title for this, its unfinished so maybe its more like a link hah.


"Love's lucid light lingers long lady,
much more might mean maybe,

So let me hear you say,
Tea in its time is all good and fine,
yet none quite so merry an carefree as wine...

Take my hand child to sea,
me oh you, you an me,
lets tattle on the breeze..."

Hello, my name is Jason.  I'm a huge fan of the beatles.  These are some lyrics I worte about a woman I once loved.  If anyone has time, I would love feedback.

1) Kisses Indicate

I can leave the place where time stops
Just outside reality
I can leave the place where time stops
Material paradise vanishes

Censored screams whispered
They're spectacular with the vernacular of confusion
Kisses indicate the illusion
There's correlations between your lacerations

Watch the sunrise
And fall asleep in your arms
Coffee kisses at sunset
And wake me from my dreams

Censored screams whispered
They're spectacular with the vernacular of confusion
Kisses indicate the illusion
There's correlations between your lacerations

2)  Dragon Fire Kisses

You re-hydrate my heart
And give me a soul inside
All I ever want is your love

I can look into your eyes
And gaze into a mystical paradise
All I ever want is your love

With lips like the smooth ocean current
Pulling my loneliness out to sea
With kisses like a dragon's fire
Burning away all my depression

All I ever want is your love

[somedude210]

Song I wrote about an old love. I incorporated and personalized lyrics of songs I used to sing to her in there (All My Loving, All I Want Is You, 40(kinda), With or Without You)

Song For You:

A thousand hours,
Since we parted ways,
A thousand times,
I said I loved you,
A thousand days,
Until my heart will heal,

No life is a certainty,
So why did I think it with you?
No deal was worth making,
But I'd give it up for you,
No one is worth knowing,
Like the way I knew you,

So tell me, Lord,
Was she the one?
Did you give up,
On your prodigal son?

I said close your eyes,
And I'll kiss you,
Because I'll always miss you,
I know what I felt to be true,
But while you've gone away,
I think about you everyday,
Even though, our love isn't true.

Your cared for me,
Loved me,
Still do,
Like a catchy tune,
You play over my head,
I can't get you out,
I don't really want to,
All I want is you

You were my harbor in a tempest,
My eyes in a moon of blindness,
My river in a time of dryness,
But all the promises we made,
To stay from cradle to grave,
When all you wanted was him,

I sing this song for you,
A song for all we stood for,
A song for all our days,
How long?
How long must I sing this song?
How long...

I see the stone set in your eye,
As you twist the thorn in my side,
But still I wait for you,
With or without you,
I still wait for you,

Through the storms, we sailed on through,
I gave it all, but you still wanted more,
And here I sit, waiting without you

[Kaleidoscope_Eyes]

I have always liked your poems, Sommie.

It took awhile, but I made it out,
I look to the horizon,
My trust renewed,
I may have lost her,
But I didn't lose the one

That's bloody, and as long as you keep to it, you will be fine  

* A burnt candle may not be re-lit but you can always light a new one *

[somedude210]

I have always liked your poems, Sommie.

It took awhile, but I made it out,
I look to the horizon,
My trust renewed,
I may have lost her,
But I didn't lose the one

That's bloody, and as long as you keep to it, you will be fine  

* A burnt candle may not be re-lit but you can always light a new one *

you flatter me. i dont even remember writing that one, but i remember what was going through my mind.

thank you for enjoying what i write. you're one of the reasons i still do