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[somedude210]

Wrote another one of the duet things like i did long ago. Kinda feels like a continuation of the last one "another day" Enjoy:

Another Day, Another Time

My heart is aching,
My heart is your home,
Its fascinating,
You know I'll never be alone,
 
Love took me by surprise,
Never knew what I had,
Till I had to say goodbye,
Maybe I'll reform again,
 
Maybe I was wrong,
I lost what was real,
Maybe I was right,
But I could dance with you all night,
 
Maybe when I see those taillights,
My heart will start to hurt,
Maybe when I see your face,
All those things will be unheard,
 
I said that I loved you,
From the very start,
It was true,
I think I've always loved you,
 
Take my hand,
I'll always be there when I can,
I give up the world for you,
I promise you, my dear,
 
Maybe we can be together,
Fight off any kind of weather,
Maybe from the very start, its true,
I'm still in love with you...
 
He was so kind to me,
Never raised his voice to me,
Oh how I wish I had been more kind,
He's one that's very tough to find,
 
She always made me laugh,
I dunno how I could be so daft,
I didn't see the signs,
I stopped seeing her mind,
 
From what I saw,
I knew it to be true,
He was unlike any man,
Always saw things through,
 
From what I saw,
I knew her to be true,
She took my hand,
And made me feel renewed,
 
My heart is aching,
My mind is racing,
Does he love me anymore,
Does he care about me anymore?

My heart is saddened,
My mind is maddened,
She whisked me along,
Singing that same old song,
 
Misery loves company,
I feel like you're a part of me,
Never feeling quite so alone with you,
Never falling the same like I did with you,
 
Still I miss him,
God I hate this,
Help me someone,
This is too depressing,
Should I give up now?
 
I wish I never said those things,
I wish I never did those things,
I hate how we're far apart,
I hate how we always depart,
Are they too much to ask for now?
 
My heart is racing,
My heart is your home,
I find you pacing,
With you, I'll never be alone,
 
And still we're like this,
Two people trapped in our own worlds,
Feeling like we're lost,
Not realizing how we're loved,
 
My heart is with you,
My mind is your soul,
I miss your smile,
I miss never being alone...

[Kaleidoscope_Eyes]

This is bloody good mate!!!
Excellent!

[Whoeveriam]

Somedude, do you actually compose these words or are they simply words, you seem to write at about 3 songs per week...

[somedude210]

some are just words, some have tunes that go with them as i write

depends on my mood. and i've been in a rather dry writing spell as of late

[Whoeveriam]

You've written everything already.

[somedude210]

hahaha how so?

[somedude210]

another day, another lyric

Take Me With You:

I want to go back,
I want to be free,
I want to love,
I want to dance,
I want to be free,

I'm scared to return,
Afraid of what's in store,
Always lying,
Someone's crying,
Its in my head,
I wish I was dead...

Get me out of this place,
Let me see a friendly face,
Take me from the hellish place,
Let me run free,

Walls...
f***ing walls all around,
My sorrows drag me down,
I drink them all until they drown,
Until my mind blocks out their sounds,

The screams of it all,
My mind never lets me rest,
The pain beneath my chest,
Can you feel it too?
Its all because of you...

Running,
Let me run away from this,
Let me run into your arms,
Show me misery and love,
Show me happiness and sorrow,

Take me with you,
Don't leave me here again,
Don't let me listen to the voices in my head,
Don't let me sleep alone in my bed,
Don't let go of my hand...

Dying,
Like a Phoenix reborn,
My passion burns anew,
My soul ignites for you,
And again, you follow through,

Promise me the stars again,
Promise me we'll never fight again,
Promise me we'll stay in touch,
And never say never again,

And life, as we know it, crumbles beneath our wings,
Like sore peasents, we toil for our wages,
Another pound to pay off our debts to ourselves,
Another sound of dying in my heart once more,

Take me with you,
Through that open door....

[emmi_luvs_beatles]

Wow!! I read back some pages and yours are really good!! ( Not that other peoples aren't  ) But they're brilliant!

[somedude210]

awww, why thank you kindly miss. I always enjoy the compliments of others. I am no where near as brilliant as others on here, but I try my best

Another night, another goddamn lyric

Cards (about Tarot, if you're wondering)

The gods mock you,
They talk to you,
They warn you of all that is wrong,

They tell you,
They warn you,
They reveal themselves through cards,

Oftentimes you never understand what goes on,
You're insightful, delightful,
But desires cloud your mind,

You want him, you need him,
And when you can't believe him,
You look for another meaning to it all,

You talk to the Joker,
You fell in love with the King,
You played with the Jack,
Who married the Queen,

You drank from their cups,
You danced on their swords,
You talked to them all,
Until they got bored,

The king and his sword,
He drank from the cup,
Not seeing clearly,
What had all bubbled up,

You asked them for help,
They gave it to you,
Maybe its wrong,

They gave you a meaning,
They gave you a way,
They showed you the map,
Of an inglorious day,

Maybe one meaning,
You seem to have forgotten,
It may not be a thing or feeling,
It may just be a person

Take it in stride,
What the gods tell you,
You'll have to decide

You take what life gives you,
The good and the bad,
You throw back the worst,
And the sh*t that makes you sad,

[somedude210]

Wishing you were here,
Another night goes by,
My mind wanders to you,
My phone sits idly by,

Its been so long,
Since I saw your face,
When I looked at you,
And decided to chase,

I miss you,
Sometimes I'm happy where you are,
Most days, I wish you were around,
Am I the only one?

How beautiful, your voice is,
The way it picks me up,
I listen, hoping,
To hear your 'Wonderful Tonight'

All we need to do in life,
Is keep talking,
Keep missing, keep hoping,
While we keep loving each other,

A thousand roses,
I give to you,
You want to be in my arms tonight,
I want to dance with you all night,

Still I watch the stars,
Knowing you're watching them too,
My heart is filled,
Still I watch my windowsill...

[emmi_luvs_beatles]

Ok, here's one I came up with literally three minutes ago. Its not done, but its a start. And theres some open spaces. If anyone could help that'd be great. It's really a depressing song lol.

I held her necklace in my hand, praying to alter the past
she left me in this cold world to fend for myself,
leaving only shards of broken memories.

I got on the train headed for Jacksonville, hoping for a new start.
I was leaving behind, only _______

I hold that knife to my tender wrist, wishing to alter the past.
I never found the light I was looking for,
.. When you left me
Now I only have scars, and broken memories.


So thats my new one! And it's still a major work in progress.

[Eliza]

K this is a song I wrote with a couple other people for our christmas play it's really cute and a duet!

First person: You're getting older losing you're hair putting on some pounds
Second person: you are not as special as you seem to think even with your stupid indie radio link!
First person: if just got the way that think I would be concern
Both: you wish that you knew you wish that you could be like me a little more
First person: every christmas they all celebrate I don't have much fun, let me go with you and if I come along you'd be happy to
Second person: I'm very busy you can't come along there isn't any room inside my crowed sled you'd fall out and then you'd be dead!
(Now right here singing stops and they first person theartens the second person and I can't remember all of it but ends with "and all of your high school friends will join cuz they think you're a racist")
Music starts back up again
Second person: I know you're kidding it's not what you want you wouldn't be coming back but if you insits dear
First person: I won't be missed here I'll ride in the sack!


It's not much but it is very cute = )

[emmi_luvs_beatles]

Okay, here's one I just wrote about 30 seconds ago. It isn't finished though.

I take the next train to Boston, hoping to find you there.
Standing there in your leater boots, the wind blowing through your hair.
My mid races with thoughts of us together, keeping our love forever.
But my fantasies of a perfect life, were left hungry and in despair.

(Chorus, in my mind she was holding out the notes in certain spots, so it might seem choppy)

You left me here, in the pouring rain.
Knowing the next day, I'd feel your pain
I can't believe you'd steal my heart and shatter it,
leaving broken homes and empty dreams.

[somedude210]

Here's one that i just wrote in about 10 minutes having got the opening line stuck in my head. I think I've been listening to Johnny Cash's American Albums too much. enjoy anyway

As I lay dying:

As I lay dying,
The time is drawing near,
Losing you was what I feared,
And here I am without you,

And as I lay dying,
Even when I knew you changed,
And what we had would never be the same,
I still loved you...

As I lay dying,
All that bitterness came flooding back,
That hurt, that anger you gave to me,
Like nothing ever changes,

And as I lay dying,
Are paths will never meet again,
Our threads no longer intertwined,
Take my hand and help me along,

As I lay dying,
I whisper a dream to you,
All those years we spent together,
I wanted to marry you,

And as I lay dying,
I hope that one day,
You'll find what you want,
Like I have found in you,

As I lay dying,
Lying to the ones I once loved,
Telling them sweet nothings,
All the while, never feeling a thing,

And as I lay dying,
I tip my hat and bid adieu,
Au revieor,  farewell and aloha,
We'll meet again, my friend,
Very soon...

[emmi_luvs_beatles]

It sucks for all I know, but I like it.


The whispering trees are known for miles around,
They help with your troubles and are known to do well,
They keep your secrets and regrets the same,
And they call true love by it’s first name

a young boy walked in to the whispering trees,
They take him by the hand, a smile in place
The comfort they bring appears on his face,
He asks them for advice as they begin to sing,
Na na na na, na na na na na, x2

The stories spread through town of the boy and the trees,
His old life washed away as he heard the wishes of the trees,
His father’s empty bottles appeared less and less,
And all of his sorrows went into the past

A young woman heard the stories of the whispering trees,
She took her new born baby and  walked to tell of her need,
They took in her sorrows of her baby’s endless cries,
She asked them for help, and they began to sing,
Na na na na, na na na na na, x2

After that day the baby never shed another tear,
The hollow cries were replaced with smiles and cheer,
Now the mother is happy and the baby the same,
Now they too know of the whispering game,

But the mother didn’t tell of the whispering trees,
For she knew they’re majestic power was growing weak,
She tried to tell all not to go near,
But no one took notice of her worries and fear.

Soon everyone was going to get the trees advice,
Asking for help and how to break a vice,
But the trees couldn’t help every single soul,
They tried to do their best but became to old

They reached their long branches to the people,
Shouting they were weak and couldn’t help them all,
But no one would listen and went along the same,
The trees became still in time and in space,

We now know the trees as the weeping willows,
Their secrets remain hidden in the past for all the new people,
But the people who knew of them can still hear them today,
And take advice from the willows once again…
Na na na na, na na na na na, x2

[Georgies Girl]

Well, here's something I wrote recently. It is inspired on the boy I like (and still he doesn't know it as far as I can see )
He's the bassist in a band and the youngest member of it (17), so that explains the title.
I'm currently working on the music, I want it to be kinda in a Bob Dylan style

Little Music Man

Play your songs for me again,
Little Music Man
Let me hear your song again
Make me love you more.

Take the old guitar lying in the corner
Play another love song
Love songs that were played before
Cheerful songs that made the hearts melt.

Spread the message of love
Let it go 'round, let it sound
I will let it into my heart.

Play your songs for me again...

Oh yes, Little Music Man
You've gotten me, gotten me so high
My Little Music Man
All your charms can't be denied.

Under those blinging lights
Of a noisy show, close your eyes
Then listen between the voices of the crowd
You can hear my heart beating, beating just for you...

Play your songs for me again...

Sing, sing for me
I'll sing my heart out for you
Sing those old songs once again
And while you sing and smile
You smile for me from the stage
I just want to hold you
I just want to tell you
That I can't help loving you.

Play your songs for me again...


Kinda sucks, but well...is one of my first songs after all

[BeatleBug]

When The Last Beatles Gone

VERSE 1

Doesn’t seem so long ago
On that Little AM radio
The world heard “Love is all you Need”

Four Lads from Liverpool
Somehow re-wrote the rules
Still today we feel their legacy.

Lift 1
One by one They’ll all join Lucy In The Sky
But we’ll still have their memories
on our worn out 45′s

CHORUS

When the Last Beatles Gone
Just their music carries on
The magic they made will never fade
Somebody somewhere will still be singing (songs)

Yesterday – Let it Be (alt:Hey Jude ‘n Obladi)
Hey Jude ‘n Obladi (alt: Yesterday – Let it Be)
While our guitar gently weeps (along)
When the Last Beatles Gone

VERSE 2

Some say they changed the world
Took us somewhere Magical
The Fab Four rocked the status quo

How we Dressed and wore our hair
What was cool and what was square
From Abbey Road to Country’s Music Row

Lift 2
One by one we’ll all join Lucy In The Sky
But Rock ‘n roll will always have
The songs they leave behind (What they left behind)

CHORUS

When the Last Beatles Gone
Just their music carries on
The magic they made will never fade
Somebody somewhere will still be singing (songs)

Yesterday – Let it Be (alt:Hey Jude ‘n Obladi)
Hey Jude ‘n Obladi (alt: Yesterday – Let it Be)
While our guitar gently weeps (along)
When the Last Beatles Gone

BRIDGE

I fell in love to Something in the Way She Moves
But who know where that Long and Winding Road is leading us to?

CHORUS

When the Last Beatles Gone
Just their music carries on
The magic they made will never fade
Somebody somewhere will still be singing (songs)

Yesterday – Let it Be (alt:Hey Jude ‘n Obladi)
Hey Jude ‘n Obladi (alt: Yesterday – Let it Be)
While our guitar gently weeps (along)
When the Last Beatles Gone
When the Last Beatles Gone….Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah….

Copyright © 1998 Paul Fitz-Patrick & Marc-Alan Barnette

[7 of 13]

well now you know
she comes and goes
my ferdapet knows
my ferdapet oh.

(song for a friends cat)

[Whoeveriam]

He's all on his own
He's left on a shelf
He's no good to you
He only thinks of himself

[7 of 13]

  next to you 

amok window my drain runs cry
can't sleep don't think
get it together with the color pink
by the end of next week
orange is better
than green or brown
white is purple is thick is deep
mako jai guru deva om
red light stop light second place go go go...
to wax this
machine
tonight.
butterflys are pink
the insects tonight
fly into my broken dreams
and thoughtless
concept
corncept'
antiseptic recursion
nono skullfactory
ain't that better ain't she sweet,
and ain't that a shame?
orange moreno y rosa tambien
otros pineapples son hacer
extra oceans
roses belong in the garden
the garden of extra delight
garden of flower und trees
colors can't
hide inside a broken cranium
tonks then con hacer
i'm so tired.
yeah.