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« Reply #40 on: November 15, 2005, 12:45:41 PM »

You can listen to this song here: http://www.geocities.com/the_end_gb/smile.htm

SEE HER SMILE

VERSE 1
While Suzanna is sound asleep
New York awakens to the traffic in the street
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« Reply #41 on: November 15, 2005, 12:48:07 PM »

And you can listen to this one here if you want: http://www.geocities.com/the_end_gb/liverpool.htm

LIVERPOOL STREET

VERSE 1
Because she worked so late tonight
She has to take that dreaded ride
Descends the stairs into this
Necessary nightmare.
Picks her pathway through the crowd
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« Reply #42 on: November 15, 2005, 12:52:02 PM »

This one was written about a typical boring Sunday - waking up with a hangover and watching the same old stuff on TV! You can both hear and listen to this one right here: http://www.geocities.com/the_end_gb/sunday.htm

SUNDAY AGAIN

VERSE 1
Outside the window it

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« Reply #43 on: November 15, 2005, 02:27:12 PM »

not to be a little bugging d*ck but i would like some reviews of any one of my songs that I've posted.

btw, The End, your songs arent bad. i enjoyed the one off the site. to lazy to read the others at the moment
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« Reply #44 on: November 15, 2005, 06:02:44 PM »

Ta mate :)

I liked the one you wrote for your girlfriend - very honest and heartfelt ;D

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« Reply #45 on: November 16, 2005, 02:23:58 AM »

hahaha, yea...she didnt buy it though ;D oh well, but ill post some others up. like this one

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« Reply #46 on: November 16, 2005, 02:26:08 AM »

i made this like two years ago before i got into U2, and i just realized that this kinda sounds like "One"

I only have one wish to be,
That you can always stick by me,
And that they will see,
That we should stick together,

One wish,
For a better world,
One wish,
To make it so,
And always be close to you and me,

It doesn
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« Reply #47 on: November 16, 2005, 02:28:54 AM »

see, now this is what happens when you mix "Working Class Hero" and U2's "Sunday Bloody Sunday"  ;D


The people are vultures,
Their lies are not true,
They tell you to do it,
And they laugh at you too,

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« Reply #48 on: November 17, 2005, 07:53:02 PM »

fellow musicians, are these any good?
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« Reply #49 on: November 17, 2005, 07:55:34 PM »

The love songs a little cliched but I'd have to hear the melodies to have a full opinion. I like the last one quite a bit though. Maybe you should write more like that.
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« Reply #50 on: November 17, 2005, 08:49:09 PM »

It's the chords underneath that can change a lyric....hard to say without heavy analysis...I am a man of little time.  :-/...It's all in the final presentation. ;)
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« Reply #51 on: November 17, 2005, 10:11:41 PM »

sorry i'm being such an ass about this but i thought i'd run my stuff by you guys before i run them by my band.

and yes, i finally, finally have a freaking band after 3 years of failure.

(always go with people that are younger then you...silly freshmen ;D)
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« Reply #52 on: November 27, 2005, 02:45:51 AM »

my most emotional song i've got, something along the lines of "Mother" emotionally. seriously, i actually put my heart and soul into the tune and it just blows your mind once you here it...which ill put up once me and my band record it. the tone is like that of U2's "Kite"



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« Reply #53 on: November 27, 2005, 03:21:48 AM »

That was really sad. Good imagery too. Do you have a name for it?
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« Reply #54 on: November 27, 2005, 03:38:37 AM »

Oh, this is another little song I wrote called Gypsy. It was orginally supposed to be about the object of my unknown affection, but it kind of turned into something else.

You've got eyes like a gypsy
And a smile twice as wide
Your gypsy cart is left behind
But you don't seem to mind
There's something you will find
You don't have to act so kind
But you're a gypsy
So what's lost is yours to keep
You don't have to dig so deep

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Gypsy boy,
Won't you stay for a while?
With your long ago tales
And your far away smile
Your touchstone heart
And your dewdrop tears
Tell me many stories
But they don't calm my fears

Your gypsy cart is moving
I understand you must go
I only hope that you can know
Just what your tattered spirit shows
As the campfire embers glow
With your gypsy troupe in tow
Just like a child
We'll just have to say adieu
See you next life, good luck too

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Gypsy laughter echoes through the night
Lost in stars of shiny gold
Another chapter will unfold
What is lost will be untold
But I can't put my life on hold
For another gvypsy's promise sold
It's too upsetting
Beneath the darkened summer sky
I'll remember you and I

(Chorus)

And if we ever meet again
Under circumstances gray
We can dance for one more day
Admit the things we'd never say
Find each other when we're stray
From the forgotten
Think of me when you hear this song
And know that you could never be wrong

(Chorus)
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« Reply #55 on: November 27, 2005, 04:49:29 AM »

thats a good song.

i was thinking something like "Watch Over". its supposed to be emotional. i just needed to express everything i felt. and i put all my emotion into it... and this crapped out ;D
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« Reply #56 on: November 27, 2005, 07:00:32 AM »

Tip toeing between genius and insanity,
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« Reply #57 on: November 27, 2005, 02:57:56 PM »

This is a simple song I wrote, I have better, I don't think it's quite there, as George Harrison said: "A few words needed yet".

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"I Can't Believe (It's Over)"

I can't believe it's over
I can't believe it's true
You were the one I loved, and that was true
You took my heart and ripped it in two

I can't believe it's over
I can't believe it's through
You took my love from me, and now I'm blue
You took my heart and ripped it in two

So sad again, I can't belive it
The air's so bad, I just can't breathe it

You we're the first I ever found
You took my hand and lifted me from the ground
You let it go I fell and found you we're the one that let me down

I can't believe it's over
I can't believe it's true
You were the one I loved and that was true
You took my heart and ripped it in two

I can't believe it's over
I can't believe it's over
I can't believe it's over
I can't believe it's over
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« Reply #58 on: November 27, 2005, 03:17:01 PM »

hahaha, that ones actually pretty good. you might want to try and put it all into like a Word document, that way there should be at least a copy saved to your computer. which you might want to back up on a disk or something (i didnt do that the first time and lost like 12 good songs i wrote down on one computer but not the other one)
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« Reply #59 on: November 27, 2005, 03:17:57 PM »

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thanks, much appreaciated, always thought i tetered on insanity and genius, just needed a reason ;D
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